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Trust Me Baby This Is Love

Please trust me Baby when you see me smile for these thoughts I have are only of you, don't turn away, let me gaze for awhile down deep in your soul through your eyes, deep blue. Yeah trust me Baby as you gaze at me, in my heart you'll see my feelings are true, believe in me Baby, I'll set you free, and show you I feel the pain you've been through. Just trust me Baby and I know we'll be the center of this cold desolate world, together, forever just you and me, as our beautiful story is unfurled. Trust me Baby, dry your eyes and think of how right this could be, you know ...this is love. 07/12/2017

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Date: 11/23/2017 10:52:00 PM
I love your poetry and this sonnet is no exception. It's so emotional and beautiful. I'm speechless. Im going to enjoy reading your different poetry forms.
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James Inman
Date: 11/24/2017 1:09:00 AM
Rhoda, thank you for your kind words. I encourage your honest opinions, the key word being honest. I hope you enjoy some of my poems and let me know how you feel (good or bad), but be forewarned, many are very dark. Your visits are always welcome.
Date: 7/19/2017 2:05:00 PM
You just unzipped the covers of my mind to the unprecedented worship of your adorable lines with a powerful choice of words that can't just be ignored. Showers of your wisdom is well palpated in this page and the only thing I can say is a big WELL DONE! Can't wait to have more of your mental command flowing through my reading mind.
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James Inman
Date: 7/22/2017 9:31:00 AM
Thanks for the great comment Funom.
Date: 7/14/2017 10:37:00 AM
This is a lovely sonnet. I like the part about your smile. Best wishes for the contest. I guess I am an odd shoe because I didn't think people would take those words with sincerity. I read what you said about Barry White. So true. Those songs were made for seduction and I could hear him saying this. Good luck.
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James Inman
Date: 7/14/2017 11:32:00 AM
Thank you Janis. It was intentionally meant to have a rather disjointed everyday speech type of flow. I did not write the phrase together so I could change the way it is perceived when it is read.
Date: 7/14/2017 3:06:00 AM
When a man comes along and helps heal a broken heart, there is no stronger bond. I love this beauty James! : )
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James Inman
Date: 7/14/2017 11:19:00 AM
Hi Connie, I left a long reply to your comment and it seems to have disappeared. Love your comment, thank you.
Date: 7/13/2017 9:34:00 PM
This is so beautiful, James. Any woman in the world would love your artistry.
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James Inman
Date: 7/14/2017 12:11:00 AM
Carole, thank you for the lovely visit. If what you say is true I wish I had known more women like you in my life.
Date: 7/13/2017 5:31:00 PM
Hi James: A beautiful sonnet. And I think you convinced her with your charming words!
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James Inman
Date: 7/14/2017 12:11:00 AM
You think so Ralph? Lol, that would be a first. Thanks for the nice words.
Date: 7/12/2017 2:56:00 PM
She is sure to like yours but not mine. hahaha. It's all that could come to me (thinking of movie scenes of people that used that phrase!) Thanks for the info on where you found my poem. Soupmail.
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James Inman
Date: 7/14/2017 12:07:00 AM
Well I read it and I liked it.

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