Trust Ii

Trust is only a word
after all, why do we trust?
When at the other end
of a broken one,
one is labelled a fool a simpleton!

© Harry J Horsman 2012

angstfree verse

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Richard Palmer

September 26, 2012 at 4:08 AM

it is Harry,so many ppl today abuse that word,seems to be played out,luv the thug look lol

Andrea Dietrich

September 25, 2012 at 8:45 PM

at first this looked like a tanka to me. With just a bit of work it could be tanka as well as free verse. I really like it, Harry! and your new picture is very nice too. I like it even better than your last avatar!

Harry Horsman

September 26, 2012 at 1:48 AM

i was thinking of a tanka, thanks for that

Poet Destroyer A

September 25, 2012 at 8:10 PM

Hola Harry, I'm done being a fool & simpleton... I like to think of myself a non-believer of everyone.. I to can not be trusted when it comes to keeping my word. I'm not gonna lie, I have such a hard time keeping my words, when I can not even trust the person asking me to trust them.. oi! that sounds confusing.. enjoyed your verse... xox~pd