Trust

Swallowed by the night rain;
                       I chased the light.
                 Though you knew I could not trust it.
               It changes itself when it meets a black hole.

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Jon A Cavanaugh

Date: 9/23/2012 9:15:00 AM

nice poem. I would have to change if I met a black hole too. I'm so glad you were featured or I would have missed your poem. Keep up the good work.

Mohammad Yamin

Date: 9/22/2012 6:40:00 AM

Thanks for replying. It is sad you are not her. It seems we have lost her in the whirlwind of time. It is heartwrenching to think this. She is such a sweet person. Reunion, however, seems impossible. In order to read your reply I had to revert back to your poem as replies posted in this way are not conveyed by the Poetrysoup. In order for reply to be conveyed you have to comment on one of the poems of the person. This is how it works. I hope you have understood. Pl write replies on this princple

Mohammad Yamin

Date: 9/20/2012 7:05:00 PM

Congrats on your well deserved feature. I am back again after reading that you are from Dhaka and obviously a Bengali. I am looking for a friend of my wife Lily who is also called Umme Salma. Are you the same person? Please respond

Umme Salma Alam
Date: 9/21/2012 7:57:00 AM

Thanks a lot Mr. Yamin! This means a lot to me! Sorry...I think I am not that Umme Salma you are looking for.

Mohammad Yamin

Date: 9/20/2012 6:48:00 PM

An elegant write - short and beautifully worded. I have read you for the first time. I am impressed.

Suzanne C. Goudreau

Date: 9/19/2012 6:36:00 PM

Congratulations on being featured here this week. Your poetry makes one think!

Umme Salma Alam
Date: 9/21/2012 8:01:00 AM

Thanks for inspiring me Suzanne! :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/17/2012 2:34:00 PM

Umme, congratulations with your awesome featured poem of the week... enjoy your day :-) PD

Umme Salma Alam
Date: 9/21/2012 8:02:00 AM

Hello! Dear PD! Thanks a lot for your support! :)

Ashek Rahaman

Date: 2/24/2012 9:22:00 AM

do you live in dhaka?? I would like to meet you in person...maybe we can write something together.....let me know

Umme Salma Alam
Date: 2/25/2012 8:36:00 AM

Yes! I am in Dhaka.ok... I am also curious. This is my email address , leena0803@hotmail.com.I am available there.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/14/2011 10:25:00 AM

Enjoying reading the very diverse poetry here today. I am happy to see you have shared a bit of your excellent writing with us today Umme. Heres hoping you have a wonderful day. Love, Carol

Umme Salma Alam
Date: 7/14/2011 11:34:00 AM

You are really inspiring! Thanks a lot Carol dear:)

Umme Salma Alam
Date: 7/14/2011 11:33:00 AM

You are really inspiring! Thanks a lot Carol dear:)

Umme Salma Alam
Date: 7/14/2011 11:30:00 AM