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Truly integrated

First you get Castigated.' Because they are? Irritated.' Next you get, indoctrinated through Being educated.' Then you'll be casterated That gets you celebrated.' Then you can, get trans-mutated As truth becomes mutilated Yet before all this goodness related Can happen.' Did you get wormed? And Hack-cinated.? Only because juval haraani, needs to know??

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Bill Baker

Date: 2/3/2024 9:41:00 PM

Nice Monorhyme, Joe. The humor is still there even though it's no laughing matter when it's happening without your approval. Write On, my friend! Bill

Joe Maverick
Date: 2/4/2024 9:14:00 AM

Looking again at your comment Bill I wrote this in the reflection of Sad irony rather than humour I Want better for America Canada Australia the U K and also the World, people have been used as Pawns for too long, being bombed Out of countries that should be Being improved would benefit The eco system no end my Friend.'

Joe Maverick
Date: 2/4/2024 9:07:00 AM

What a downbeat agenda though Bill..! Even cesspools get emptied In the end, and to be fair once Spread on the earth, it is a good Addative..yet this waste is not even usefull to spread..' Yet it is..' Enough said.!

David Fisher

Date: 2/3/2024 1:22:00 PM

Nicely done with some powerful lines! Did you make up hack-cinated? Great term. I'll rate your poem great.

Joe Maverick
Date: 2/3/2024 3:04:00 PM

Yes Hack-cinated David I made It up..Hands up.' Look up heads Up.' Yet all words are made up its Because we are creator oriented Mate.' Look thanks for stopping By.'