Truly Alive

To be where you are

          whatever you do... is to

                    be truly alive


April 24, 2018


haiku Human Nature Contest
By Mick Talbot
N/A

humanitynatureselfwindwisdomsenryu

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Robertina B.

May 8, 2018 at 6:28 PM

So true Susan.. You penned it so perfectly.. A lovely haiku!! All the best to you!!

Susan Gentry

May 8, 2018 at 8:32 PM

Thanks, Robertina. Appreciate you reading and commenting.

Andrea Dietrich

April 27, 2018 at 1:17 AM

this is so good. It's so true. Cleverly expressed.

Susan Gentry

April 27, 2018 at 11:50 AM

Thanks Andrea. Congratulations on your win. Mine didn't even place... still like it though. :)

CayCay Godwin

April 26, 2018 at 11:32 AM

Live in the moment captured in a Haiku - it is absolutely perfect. My 2nd read where I find my own beliefs in your words, it can't get better than that (except if we could change the world.) Another 'right-on' - can't help it. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Susan Gentry

April 26, 2018 at 10:05 PM

Thank you!! Hugs.