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3/2/2025 for Bitesize Contest No103 Poetry Contest sponsored by Line Gauthier

A prince was heard to cry and wail, lamenting the sad fairytale into which he had been born. Why was this gentle lad forlorn? His true love's kiss, against his will, instead of giving life, would kill.

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Date: 2/23/2025 9:27:00 PM
Love which is suspected as fraught.A true theme of a fairytale.Very nice.
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David Crandall
Date: 2/24/2025 10:25:00 AM
Thanks Akham!
Date: 2/23/2025 12:56:00 PM
Romance gone haywire is pretty scary. Your poem carries a warning. Thumbs up.
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 2/23/2025 3:11:00 PM
It's a common saying. You don't have to give credit.
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David Crandall
Date: 2/23/2025 2:49:00 PM
haha - thanks Hilda! I like that phrase, romance gone haywire. If I steal it from you someday, I will give you credit!

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