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True Lovers and the Star

True Lovers and the Star Under the clear night sky sat a boy and a girl who professed true love for each other ‘One day I will capture you a star’ said the boy confidently The girl was amused and cuddled up with him deep inside his arms They would grow into young adults and would continue to go star gazing ‘My promise to you is real’ said the young man The girl felt his love and held his hand with interlocking fingers They would turn mid-age together yet would still find their way under the night sky ‘I have not forgotten about your star’ said the now slightly graying man Their love was true and their kisses were as rich as ever Old age reached them and they looked out the window of the hospital room up to the skies and they saw a shooting star ‘That star is for you my love’ he whispered as his final breath released him For the first time she was alone yet she had her star

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Date: 2/7/2025 7:13:00 AM
So romantic and sweet. A little birdie told me it's your birthday. Happy happy birthday to you!
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Robert James Liguori
Date: 2/7/2025 7:19:00 AM
Thanks!!! Yeah tomorrow is my birthday! Thank you so much!!!
Date: 2/4/2025 12:10:00 AM
Dear robert the ending made me so sad, this is so soul stirring and heartfelt and your storytelling here is so descriptive and vivid, that i think any reader would feel the depth of what youv delivered here! How lovers grow old together and when one leaves and all thats left are memories youv expressed all that so well here! A star that would never die, and love too never dies, pleasure reading this! Sending you light always
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Date: 2/3/2025 4:30:00 PM
Nice luv story Bob
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Date: 2/3/2025 2:37:00 PM
Very nice. That is a stellar relationship.
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Tom Woody
Date: 2/3/2025 4:30:00 PM
Ha! Good one

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