Edward Ibeh Poet Rictameter

True Love Stays

love stays

               when trees in fall

        bare of leaves. It's rays still

  shine in the winter of our discontent

when moon and stars flee the night sky,

        when hope crumbles to dust.

              come what may, true...

                       love stays



Date written: 10/16/2021

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L Milton Hankins October 16, 2021 at 8:56 PM So true, Edward, "when hope crumbles...true love stays." Good poem. Makes me want to try a Rictameter, and I'll have to do a bit of research! Edward Ibeh October 17, 2021 at 10:24 AM Thank you very much, Milt:-) Try a Rictameter, they're fun!

Vijay Pandit October 16, 2021 at 1:01 PM Beautiful sentiments, Edward--true love stays come what may. Edward Ibeh October 17, 2021 at 10:24 AM Thank you very much, Vijay:-)

Darlene De Beaulieu October 16, 2021 at 11:45 AM Hello Edward, Yes no matter what a couple goes through true love will be strong. Blessings my friend. Darlene De Beaulieu October 17, 2021 at 10:37 AM Hello Edward, you ae welcome my friend. Blesings. Edward Ibeh October 17, 2021 at 10:25 AM Thank you so much, Darlene:-)