Jack Ellison Poet Quatrain

True Love Is Such a Beautiful Thing

True love is such a beautiful thing
Unequaled in our human emotions
Eons ahead of hate and mistrust
This feeling of absolute devotion

Like no other since the world was new
So honoured and tested by time
Like a soft summer breeze on a starlit night
Like the smell of sweet roses divine

Nothing equals the feeling of love
Not even sweet chocolate fudge
Uh maybe chocolate fudge is pretty close
Naw, love's much sweeter, nudge, nudge

Ahh, I've thought of something sweeter
The smell of a newborn infant
Now who could contest that my friends
Divine, like it's heaven sent

© Jack Ellison 2013

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Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper November 1, 2013 at 4:04 PM Charming, simply charming! Always a pleasure to stop in and read the works of "Jack, King of the Quatrain"! Thanks for this! MC Jack Ellison November 1, 2013 at 5:19 PM Great compliment my friend! Thanks! Must drop by and read some of yours! Thanks MC

John Posey October 30, 2013 at 6:56 PM Jack, I believe we are on the same wavelength with this one.... I wrote one and placed in a contest some time ago... You might like "True Love Never Know Why" great writing..... Regards, Jake Jack Ellison November 1, 2013 at 5:26 PM Thank you my friend, I will definitely check out yours! Cheers, Jack

Poet Tacito October 29, 2013 at 10:31 AM Love is much sweeter, indeed. This made me smile sir! Jack Ellison October 29, 2013 at 11:29 AM Still thinking about the chocolate fudge thingy! LOL

Carol Eastman October 29, 2013 at 8:32 AM Good morning... A love poem before my coffee?... Well I guess... Why not... Dragons up and creating havoc before my coffee too... LOL... Don't think Dragon OR I am fully awake... But Hubby took some vacation days and has taken over my computer... So it's super duper early or nada... What a crazy life!... Kinda like having a new born around here when Hubby's on vacation... Everyone routine is messed up... LOL Jack Ellison October 29, 2013 at 8:35 AM Now you be nice to that guy Mike, ya hear!!! You both have a happy day! xoxox