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True Love (End Line Poem)

True valentine          ---LOVE
No matter the price ---CONQUERS
Sweet pleasure for     ---ALL



This POEM is an Example of a New Form of
POETRY Dane-Ann and HGarvey Daniel Esquire are trying to sanction
They call it “ End Line Word “ Poetry Thank-YOU

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Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

February 25, 2010 at 6:31 PM

Dear Marty, A Classical " End Line Word " POEM I have a Senryu " End Line Word " POEM Titled "LOVE" YOU have an amazing POETIC Insight YOU picked up on this Form right off the Bat ( I'm a Baseball Fan )(( RED SOX )) I Thank-YOU for your Support and Participation and YOUR Gracious Comments to those who also wrote This Form YOUR Liege ALWAYS...HG SOUP MAIL CALL ( In 5 Minutes )

Laura Spears

February 18, 2010 at 5:31 PM

Very nice end line Valentine poem.

Jared Pickett

February 16, 2010 at 3:50 PM

You did a good job following meter.. Wonderful poem my friend...:JP]

Charmaine Chircop

February 14, 2010 at 2:35 PM

So Sweet and true,,Sweet with no need of sugar..Charma

February 14, 2010 at 2:02 PM

What a lovely Valentine poem. Yes, true love is indeed wonderful. Good use of this new form. If you entered the contest with this one, best wishes. Karen

Doris Culverhouse

February 14, 2010 at 11:53 AM

good form, sweet valentine

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

February 14, 2010 at 7:28 AM

Well said ..a message in a few words ..but a powerful message.. am working on one also... End Line Word ... an especially great title too ..HVD to u Marty ..luv.. "Sweetheart"

Jessica Arteaga

February 13, 2010 at 11:43 PM

all yo u need is love bapadada, nice end line this new poem is fun looking

June Ellen Smith

February 13, 2010 at 11:32 PM

I just realized we both had Love Conquers All as the end of each poem. Thanks for all your comments. We must be of the same mind. Ellen

John Beam

February 13, 2010 at 11:18 PM

thanks again for comments and thanks for help here with End line poem and love conquers all

June Ellen Smith

February 13, 2010 at 9:59 PM

Thanks for the comment. I really liked yours. It was my first attempt at one. Ellen

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

February 13, 2010 at 7:39 PM

Dear Marty I do HOPE YOU enter this in Dane-Ann's "End Line Word" Contest I give YOU YOUR Congratulations Now and again when it is official I admire YOUR grasp on POETRY I will be reading YOU soon YOUR Talent is a Great source of Inspiration I am Proud to have met YOU and to be YOUR POETIC Friend YOUR Liege ALWAYS...HG -- P.S. Pure Excellentcy