True Love

Yes, this will be my tenth bride people say it will not last the others were rehearsals this time it’s for real Jack Horne

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Gwendolen Song

Date: 5/18/2011 1:14:00 PM

Nice lesson in this one, Jack..with more experience one DOES get better..just like a fine wine! Gwendolen

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/18/2011 7:37:00 AM

enjoyed to the hilt, jack.... tons of congrats!:) huggs

Tahera Mannan

Date: 5/18/2011 6:19:00 AM

Oooh Tenth wow. Many congrats for this win Jack.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/17/2011 10:27:00 PM

hahaha. I really enjoy this one, even the second time around it kind of makes me chuckle. Congratulations on your win.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 5/17/2011 5:37:00 PM

Wow a harem! unique take on the topic and it would fit the culture in which at certain times in history men had multiple wifes! Congrad's Light & Love

John Freeman

Date: 5/17/2011 5:24:00 PM

Jack, Great entry. Congratulations onyour poem's honor in the winning circle. Agape, Moses

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/17/2011 2:00:00 PM

Yo, Jack, can you see me smiling? Congratulations on your big win in Dr. Ram's contest. Way to go! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/17/2011 1:10:00 PM

Congrats Jack on your amazing win in Wedding Rehearsal contest with this dynamic poem luv.. enjoy another treasured win with luv my friend..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/17/2011 12:43:00 PM

Congratulations on the win in Dr. Ram's contest Jack. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/17/2011 11:55:00 AM

Congratulations on the sixth place win in my contest, jack

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/11/2011 9:27:00 PM

tenth bride?? ARe you kidding me? hahaha. (I hope this is just fiction). Glad I came back here and found this funny one. Luv, Andrea

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/30/2011 11:12:00 AM

Good luck and I hope that it works..Enjoyed reading your sense of humor..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 4/28/2011 3:41:00 AM

You got me snickering here, Jack-- whoever said that third time's the charm was dead wrong-- everybody knows it's the TENTH time-- glad that you got that right! :) I hope this places high :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/25/2011 10:01:00 AM

VERY witty, Jack. Dr. Ram will love it as much as I do. No need to wish you luck -- this IS a winner! Love, Carolyn

Francine Roberts

Date: 4/24/2011 1:12:00 PM

tenth huh, yeah and my next husband will be normal... cute one Jack

Judy Konos

Date: 4/24/2011 10:54:00 AM

You can call her Wednesday! LOL ...