True Love

Yes, this will be my tenth bride
people say it will not last
the others were rehearsals
this time it’s for real

Jack Horne

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Gwendolen Song

May 18, 2011 at 1:14 PM

Nice lesson in this one, Jack..with more experience one DOES get better..just like a fine wine! Gwendolen

Nette Onclaud

May 18, 2011 at 7:37 AM

enjoyed to the hilt, jack.... tons of congrats!:) huggs

Tahera Mannan

May 18, 2011 at 6:19 AM

Oooh Tenth wow. Many congrats for this win Jack.

Andrea Dietrich

May 17, 2011 at 10:27 PM

hahaha. I really enjoy this one, even the second time around it kind of makes me chuckle. Congratulations on your win.

Debbie Guzzi

May 17, 2011 at 5:37 PM

Wow a harem! unique take on the topic and it would fit the culture in which at certain times in history men had multiple wifes! Congrad's Light & Love

John Freeman

May 17, 2011 at 5:24 PM

Jack, Great entry. Congratulations onyour poem's honor in the winning circle. Agape, Moses

Carolyn Devonshire

May 17, 2011 at 2:00 PM

Yo, Jack, can you see me smiling? Congratulations on your big win in Dr. Ram's contest. Way to go! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

May 17, 2011 at 1:10 PM

Congrats Jack on your amazing win in Wedding Rehearsal contest with this dynamic poem luv.. enjoy another treasured win with luv my friend..

Carol Sunshine Brown

May 17, 2011 at 12:43 PM

Congratulations on the win in Dr. Ram's contest Jack. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

May 17, 2011 at 11:55 AM

Congratulations on the sixth place win in my contest, jack

Andrea Dietrich

May 11, 2011 at 9:27 PM

tenth bride?? ARe you kidding me? hahaha. (I hope this is just fiction). Glad I came back here and found this funny one. Luv, Andrea

Sara Kendrick

April 30, 2011 at 11:12 AM

Good luck and I hope that it works..Enjoyed reading your sense of humor..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

April 28, 2011 at 3:41 AM

You got me snickering here, Jack-- whoever said that third time's the charm was dead wrong-- everybody knows it's the TENTH time-- glad that you got that right! :) I hope this places high :)