True Love

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April 3, 2025

Inspired by "Bard's Birthday" Poetry Contest

Sponsor: Oliver Mckeithan

" The course of true love never did run smooth " - A Midsummer's Night’s Dream (Shakespeare) TRUE LOVE True love, magical, bewildering at times! Red in colour when experience the passion, Unraveling a puzzling mystery of the heart Ends often with heartbreaking sacrifice ! Love which can never be forgotten, never wiped out, Often facing unimaginable despair and morbid grief, Voice of wild youth can never be silenced with threats, Emotions undying never crushed by misfortune!

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 4/28/2025 12:02:00 PM

Hello Mala, A love like that is hard to find. Friendship & Love, /Darlene/

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/3/2025 12:58:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your creative "True Love" Acrostic write. Good Job... "Good Luck" Have a wonderful day writing away..............

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 4/3/2025 1:07:00 PM

Thank you, Paula. Delighted to know you enjoyed my humble effort!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/3/2025 12:52:00 PM

I love how you explored the theme of his quote. GREAT job, Mala.

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 4/3/2025 1:06:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea. I love reading Shakespeare, his quotes are just sublime!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/3/2025 10:34:00 AM

- So true and beautifully written, Mala - True love can be confusing at times... especially when you're young :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 4/3/2025 1:04:00 PM

Thank you. How confused were we when young, right, Anne-Lise? We made so many mistakes!!! Reading Shakespeare is an enlightening experience.

Tom Woody

Date: 4/3/2025 6:29:00 AM

Upbuilding acrostic malabika

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 4/3/2025 1:02:00 PM

Thank you, Tom.