True Love

True Love


T o find, it's like a diamond
R arely it comes our way
U nique is the path it chooses
E nchanted in its play
L urking across the earth
O ver my head and yours
V erily, who shall it go to
E veryone wants is first!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Khan Avatar
January 14, 2009 at 8:42 PM
hey its really nice wish infuture every one got true love just like ur poem :)
L Avatar
December 26, 2008 at 10:28 PM
Like this one, short and to the point, great write
L Avatar
December 21, 2008 at 6:16 AM
This is wonderful Maryam, very creative, and sound words of wisdom. that's great
Montgomery Avatar
December 10, 2008 at 9:08 AM
Wow... I love this one!!
Dawood Avatar
December 2, 2008 at 1:42 AM
So true!! Sad though, the part about everyone wanting it yet rarely coming our way. Well done - and Welcome to poetry soup(I know, im a bit slow!!) Peace Fathima
Gass Avatar
December 1, 2008 at 4:27 PM
A lovely poem in both form and sentiment Great acoustic. Love Robin
Malebranche Avatar
December 1, 2008 at 4:23 PM
Very creative and truthful...True Love is one thing that is very hard to find and when we do, we must cherish it.
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