William Kelii Kekaula Poet Choka

Notes About The Poem

True Jupiterians

Lunaris Jovis 

planetae, planetary

moons of Jupiter

as of the past year

of twenty eighteen, there are

seventy-nine known

satellites, whereto,

four of the largest moons were

first discovered by

Galileo back

in sixteen-o-nine, first was

Io, Europa,

Ganymede, lastly,

Callisto, all confirmed by

the following year.



Date: 06/08/2019
*Syllable Counter checked 5-7-5, 5-7-5, 5-7-5, 5-7-5, 5-7-5 = 85 Syllables Total

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Caren Krutsinger June 9, 2019 at 11:52 PM I imagine the stars are clear where you are, but can you ever see Jupiter? William Kelii Kekaula June 10, 2019 at 12:28 AM In earlier days, nah, but nowadays, I can't even see the tip of me nose Caren, Aloha William

Andrea Dietrich June 8, 2019 at 10:02 AM very informational. You must enjoy astronomy, William! William Kelii Kekaula June 8, 2019 at 10:14 AM Yes my razor-sharp Andrea, anything that hinges to the etherealism embodied within, Aloha William