True Joy

Soothing breeze putting my mind

 at ease. Worries taken away and held

 at bay by a radiant sun. Shining so

 bright worries kept out of sight. It

 feels so right no barriers no strife. In

 this life on earth we don't always get

 what we think we deserve. But sometimes

 it's the not so easy ride that helps us to

 renew our minds. Our failures help to

 remind us we are only human. In the flesh

 we will all fall and fail, its human frailty.

 Yet we can be pulled through towards true

 joy and glory, by an ever loving creator. A

 forgiving saviour
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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November 21, 2013 at 6:13 PM
Love your poem Andy, yes indeed no matter what God or saviour we believe in, if they truly love us, they will love us all unconditionally, That is what God is all about Love compassion and peace for all. trouble with life is we grow up being told not to sin, but what we need to avoid sin, is guidance in how to truly love each other with care and compassion for all in the world, then there wouldn't be any need to sin. that's what love is all about is it not. love as ever Elizabeth
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