True Friends

I see beyond your veil
I hear the voice of your silence
I touch the air you breathe
I am your friend

You hid your secrets with me where they won't budge
You poured your heart to me cos I won't judge
You prayed me a miracle in the midst of the surge
You are my friend

I talk to you even when you can't hear me
I smile at you even when you can't see me
I hold your hand even when you can't feel me
I am your friend

Your lips speak the truth others fear
Your eyes tell a story loud and clear
Your hands drip with oil and myrrh
You are my friend

I see the strength in your weakness
I see the light in your darkness
I see the joy in your sadness
I am your friend
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Austin Avatar
March 29, 2016 at 2:34 PM
Shams. and the Rumiesque - the ancient of true friendship is reminded. I like the structure of this one. Congrats, daver
Dawn Avatar
April 5, 2016 at 4:46 AM
Thanks daver!
Rosario Avatar
March 28, 2016 at 9:54 AM
wonderful poem.
Dawn Avatar
April 5, 2016 at 4:42 AM
Thanks Madalyn.
A  Avatar
March 19, 2016 at 12:15 AM
Lovely poem Jason. SKAt
Dawn Avatar
March 19, 2016 at 7:23 PM
Thank you!
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March 16, 2016 at 12:06 PM
Great write Jason, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about you're poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. You're New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
Dawn Avatar
March 17, 2016 at 6:58 PM
Thank you Linda. You've got quite a collection! It will be hard to like just one. ;) Your criticisms are very welcome. Cheers!
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