True Devotion



My dearest darling it is true
when I say that I love you
I’ll love you forever and a day
and after that I’ll find a way, 
Sometimes I say words and do
Things that you don’t want me to
You must realize that these notions
do not show my true devotions.
So remember well what I’ve said
For my darling when we’re wed
You’ll always know that I love you
no matter what I say or do!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Baker Avatar
May 4, 2022 at 3:40 PM
Well written rhyme, David. It reminds me of the song, "Devotion" by the Everley Brothers way back in the 60's. This poem points the way one should enter a love relationship. Love is supreme! Bill
Bangalee Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 2:44 AM
True love will bring the true devotion
D'Braunstein Avatar
January 19, 2022 at 4:31 AM
Yes, we had both for sure!
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