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True Devotion

My dearest darling it is true when I say that I love you I’ll love you forever and a day and after that I’ll find a way, Sometimes I say words and do Things that you don’t want me to You must realize that these notions do not show my true devotions. So remember well what I’ve said For my darling when we’re wed You’ll always know that I love you no matter what I say or do!

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Date: 5/4/2022 3:40:00 PM
Well written rhyme, David. It reminds me of the song, "Devotion" by the Everley Brothers way back in the 60's. This poem points the way one should enter a love relationship. Love is supreme! Bill
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Date: 6/29/2021 2:44:00 AM
True love will bring the true devotion
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David D'Braunstein
Date: 1/19/2022 4:31:00 AM
Yes, we had both for sure!

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