True Blue

Mirroring the Sky
A frozen webbing of Ice
Beautiful : Blue Hue

Inspired by Raul Moreno's Contest " Icy Cascade "

natureseaseasonshaiku

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 3/4/2010 5:12:00 PM

alot like we would see in Vermont land eh HG? Beautiful is right!-

Date: 3/2/2010 2:15:00 PM

And a beautiful view in this poem. Nice use of imagery to share your thoughts. Keep on writing! Thank you for your kind comment. Karen

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/2/2010 6:26:00 AM

so many blue things are enchanting as is your loverly verse! Light & Love

Audrey Haick

Date: 2/27/2010 1:08:00 PM

Your words paint the same beautiful picture in the photo, HG! Wonderful work, I'm appreciative of all your kind comments and like you, will read more of your exemplary work. Oh, if only we had more time!! lol But I will make time because, poetry is like a too much wine to me sometimes-intoxicating! lol Peace, Audrey

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 2/27/2010 10:06:00 AM

This is a masterpiece....you know how to cook Haikus well my friend..Charma

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 2/27/2010 8:04:00 AM

great work!! good luck

Susan Palli

Date: 2/27/2010 7:19:00 AM

Loved it!

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 2/26/2010 5:58:00 PM

All your other ladies have said it..your a treasure. BG

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/26/2010 2:58:00 PM

Hey True Blue ..my S.B. forever... I never received your SOUP MAIL... did some other "lovely" take your attention away from your "Sweetheart" ???? luv.. forever your "Sweetheart" Linda-Marie..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/26/2010 11:21:00 AM

Well my dear .. a wonderful Haiku and good luck in Raul' s new contest.. my entry is Liquidity.. just wanted to let u know Nathan Dilts also wrote an End Line Word poem but I see u already had commented on it... slowly building a great "fan base" are u and sweet Dane Ann... will keep looking for more.. luv.to u ..my silent beau ..forever.. "Sweetheart" of P.S. & U

Lynette Chachere

Date: 2/26/2010 11:17:00 AM

Like a reflecting image of ice. using the sky as a mirror. creative and it sounds so beautiful, Harry. amazing poem&imagery. good luck, with the words you use, it sounds like it will be on the top list.(: -Always&Forever Your Sister Spirit, Lynn