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True Beauty

I’ve fallen in love With the beauty of How the sun sets at the beach, Leaving you without speech. The beach gets quiet, Gone is the daytime riot. The sun sets in that big pink sky Revealing the stars on high. Life can be so taxing And the sunset is so relaxing. It takes your breath away This sight at the end of every day. So next time you get the chance To stop for more than a glance, For Heavens sake do so, And let me know Your thoughts when you see That which is true beauty.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 12/22/2008 10:47:00 PM
I've fallen in love with your poem, it's certainly a great one and from the deepest part of the heart...I love the beach...I lived in Florida for a couple of years...Hollywood was where I lived the longest, but I stayed in Tampa and Hallendale too...I don't believe I'd want to live down there anymore, the dang weather has been so crazy in the past several years, it might blow me away. thanks so much for your thoughtful comments...Lawrence in Lou. Ky...
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