Trucker Joe's Lament

He lost his job, now drives a rig. The pros are small; the cons are big. A sleeper cab is his abode on tedious and lonesome road. In Old West days, a steed he’d mount; now yellow lines he cannot count. A steady stream, long have they flowed on tedious and lonesome road. A ribbon flat, it sometimes winds, descends or climbs until he finds it’s all one constant episode on tedious and lonesome road. By some he’s loathed along the path. For taking space, he’s shown their wrath. Sparse traffic lessens not his load on tedious and lonesome road. He drives and while he drives, he yearns for life’s return; his stomach churns. He knows his hope but can erode on tedious and lonesome road. For the Solitude Contest of scott thirtyseven (Some truck drivers have a very hard and lonely life and it's even worse when they work for companies that couldn't care less about their welfare)
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Lawless Avatar
November 16, 2014 at 5:25 PM
The solitude of loneliness and doubt....a very troubling place to be alone.
May Avatar
November 11, 2014 at 9:23 AM
Well written Andrea...Congrats on the win
Mandani Avatar
November 10, 2014 at 10:46 AM
Ha," the tedious and lonesome road" of life! Nice write.
Chutani Avatar
November 10, 2014 at 5:39 AM
solitude also makes one feel lonely and one yearns to be with loved ones. congrats.
Yvonne Avatar
November 9, 2014 at 6:28 PM
Congratulations on your fine win.
Allison Avatar
November 9, 2014 at 4:11 PM
dropping back with my congrats Andrea:-) hugs jan xx
Thirtyseven Avatar
November 7, 2014 at 11:50 PM
Wow this poem is one of yours!!! I didn't have a clue, but now I know why it's such a great Kryielle. Anyway Andrea I've finally judged my "Solitude" competition, and while I wait for Soup to post the winners list, when I'll announce it all properly in a blog, I'm letting a few people know how they did. This wonderful poem came at the right time, as in South Australia they are finding too many un-roadworthy trucks that trucking companies are handing their drivers. Wonderful poem, you placed 7th.
Yvonne Avatar
November 1, 2014 at 6:42 AM
This one sounds personal. A superb write.
Loving Iii Avatar
September 17, 2014 at 6:18 PM
I'm a truck driver and you only mentioned part of it. the women mentioned in my poem are the first and middle names of my sisters and mother. no body famous just us.
Mcintosh Avatar
August 29, 2014 at 1:07 AM
WOW. I just love this. I have a lot of truck drivers in my family. Not all of them living now though - they were definitely GOOD guys, though. Love and prayers, Gina
Johnson Avatar
August 14, 2014 at 8:21 PM
The white line fever tried to decieve her. But her man returned for what he yearned. You wrote awesome Andrea. :) If you want to hear a good song about trucking by a good band. You can check out Mason Proffit's Hard Luck Woman online. Peace. :)
Sirak Avatar
August 13, 2014 at 8:03 AM
You have described solitude so well. I like the connection you made between truckers and lonesome cowboys of long ago.
Comporozos Avatar
August 12, 2014 at 6:23 AM
Moving lyric, evoking lament in the reader. Something like an elegy for dreams lost. It conveys solitude for real
Anish Avatar
August 11, 2014 at 8:19 PM
Remind me of the song "Truck Driving Man" from the 1970's. You are quite prolific - but without losing quality. Is this about your better half? It is quite a poem! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Carrillo Avatar
August 11, 2014 at 7:48 AM
A very nice poem. I once had a friend that was a truck driver and his wife went with him. Good luck in the contest... Lucilla
Ryerson Avatar
August 11, 2014 at 3:52 AM
Oh yes my friend, I know of whom your speak...Do you still go with him occasionally?----And the winner is: Andrea!! For her wonderful and well-written Kyrielle! (wild applause, whistles etc.) Come on up Andrea and say a few words to your fans...Your #1 fan and best friend on the Soup Tim Ryerson is sitting right there on the front row...
Gasun Avatar
August 10, 2014 at 11:00 AM
It is so sad to know that there are employees who work hard & sacrifice a lot for their company and for many but they aren't given so much benefits & this isn't only true to truckers but other field jobs. This is a very touching poem my dearest friend Andrea. Excellently crafted in a perfect form. Thank u so much for sharing! Wish u best of luck always. Tysm as well for your precious time stoppin by on one of my latest poems. God bless! love lots and many big hugs, Leonora
Austin Avatar
August 10, 2014 at 10:37 AM
hE's in a kind of box. I know the sensation. Have a good Sunday. Love, daver
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
August 10, 2014 at 1:39 AM
Nice rhyming Andrea..:) and the message wow!
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
August 10, 2014 at 1:41 AM
I remember my father not a driver on land but on sea and true he missed allot to our growth as children...
Maverick Avatar
August 10, 2014 at 1:36 AM
Well done Andrea, with quite a bit of input from your Joe I shouldn't wonder..'
Dietrich Avatar
August 10, 2014 at 2:02 AM
hubbie is not even aware of this poem (he hates poems). though, yes, the past that he lived influenced what I wrote. today he is still driving but the conditions not nearly as bad as what he had even just last year!!
Mister Roboto Avatar
August 10, 2014 at 12:43 AM
I need to go to bed! WOW! when I first glanced at this title, I thought it said" Trucker JOE LAMBERT!!!!!!!!!!!!!what the Crap! Anyways, I must be CooKoo! This is a cool little rhyme from the eyes of your Joe I presume! Soupmail
Kelley Avatar
August 9, 2014 at 11:29 PM
Wow! Well written! You really know how to paint a picture with words.
Bauer Avatar
August 9, 2014 at 7:23 PM
this is so beautifully written, andrea! you are such a master (mistress?) of this type of poem - no one does it better...
Kiser Avatar
August 9, 2014 at 6:04 PM
I used to work for a trucking company, years ago; those truckers...when they came in, you couldn't shut them up; every day, new stories arrived, which made it more difficult to post their gas card charges, in the system. A wonderful poem that rings so true.
Hamilton Avatar
August 9, 2014 at 3:50 PM
this is excellent Andrea it is a lonesome and often heartless life as they battle their way from A to B they are the new warriors on the block gl in contest hugs
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