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Trouncing Mine Heart

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                 "This is Spring" said I
                  what could go wrong 

                     The sun shining
                   with a soft warmth
                   mine eyne glowing
          my brain trouncing mine heart
                    wheedling me on

                       "Look there
                      in the garden
                  presenting Spring's
                        soft breeze
                     pining affection
                          leaning
                     pointing in my
                         direction

                    her florescence"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 9/20/2016 1:00:00 AM
Very flowery is the scene you show here James, It calls to mind innumerable such sights, how are you by the way, and did you read my last mail?
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Date: 5/13/2015 1:51:00 AM
Absolutely lovely poem, James! Thanks for sharing your beautiful work! Always, Laura
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Date: 5/8/2015 1:08:00 PM
oh....i like!!!! hi, my friend! have a good weekend! jimbo
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Date: 5/3/2015 6:19:00 AM
A soothing, gentle feel of your poetry, dear poet. Hugs! :)
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Date: 5/3/2015 1:51:00 AM
this is very beautiful, James!
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Date: 5/2/2015 10:39:00 AM
The woman spring, eh? I love this idea. Love your very original stye. Love, daver
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Date: 4/29/2015 2:36:00 PM
how delightful this piece is, james... well done!.. huggs
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Date: 4/28/2015 3:00:00 PM
This is so peaceful James...I love it...a favourite
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