Trouncing Mine Heart

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                 "This is Spring" said I
                  what could go wrong 

                     The sun shining
                   with a soft warmth
                   mine eyne glowing
          my brain trouncing mine heart
                    wheedling me on

                       "Look there
                      in the garden
                  presenting Spring's
                        soft breeze
                     pining affection
                          leaning
                     pointing in my
                         direction

                    her florescence"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Maverick Avatar
September 20, 2016 at 1:00 AM
Very flowery is the scene you show here James, It calls to mind innumerable such sights, how are you by the way, and did you read my last mail?
Breidenthal Avatar
May 13, 2015 at 1:51 AM
Absolutely lovely poem, James! Thanks for sharing your beautiful work! Always, Laura
Goff Avatar
May 8, 2015 at 1:08 PM
oh....i like!!!! hi, my friend! have a good weekend! jimbo
Nunez Avatar
May 3, 2015 at 6:19 AM
A soothing, gentle feel of your poetry, dear poet. Hugs! :)
Dietrich Avatar
May 3, 2015 at 1:51 AM
this is very beautiful, James!
Austin Avatar
May 2, 2015 at 10:39 AM
The woman spring, eh? I love this idea. Love your very original stye. Love, daver
Onclaud Avatar
April 29, 2015 at 2:36 PM
how delightful this piece is, james... well done!.. huggs
Smith Avatar
April 28, 2015 at 3:00 PM
This is so peaceful James...I love it...a favourite
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