Troubled Waters

If           If you need the love and guidance
you        you only need to ask
need      need, the breeding ground of love
a            a hand shake says it all
friend     friend the word is written
I'm         I'm the strengh behind support
Sailing    Sailing into problems  
right       right between the masks of fate
behind    behind the words of freedom  
like         like the cousins on a lake
over       over-coming life delussions 
trouble   trouble rears it's deadly face
water     Water like the tears of life
I             I become the burdan king
Will        Will the problems not defeat us
Ease      Ease your troubles and your woes
your       your dreams become our focus
mind      Mind your manors as we grow
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Kendrick Avatar
March 10, 2014 at 10:27 AM
Ahh!! Great quality poetry!! Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara
Hamilton Avatar
March 10, 2014 at 6:29 AM
hi congrats on win hugs
Mehta Avatar
March 10, 2014 at 5:44 AM
Flowing verse with lovely acrostic. Congrats on the win. bernard
Harper Avatar
March 9, 2014 at 9:59 PM
Bernard, wonderful to think a handshake is as good as your word still, enjoyable poem about friendship, congratulations
Johnson Avatar
March 9, 2014 at 7:58 PM
Congratulations on your winning entry. Love, Joyce
Jerden Avatar
March 9, 2014 at 7:01 PM
Bernard, this is good, but you are missing some lines as of today. Check your spelling also. Cheers, Roy
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