Troubled Soul

You took the time it took to notice Me
You said your troubled soul was plain to see
You held my hand and led me home at a time when I was lost
You laid yourself on water ...and I crossed

You laid yourself on water and I crossed
You laid yourself on water and I crossed
You placed yourself upon the line not caring of the cost
You laid yourself on water and I crossed

You picked me up each time life knocked me down
I thought these feet would never leave the ground
Each journey had it's price and it was you who climbed the cross
You Laid yourself on water and I crossed

You laid yourself on water and I crossed
You laid yourself on water and I crossed
You placed yourself upon the line not caring of the cost
You laid yourself on water and I crossed

I've looked to you to know what's right from wrong
And when the darkness falls and light is gone
You've kept the darkness from my door and saved me from the frost
You laid yourself on water and I crossed
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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May 15, 2014 at 9:34 AM
Peter, wow, I never had any one pick me up when I was down. I will do differently with my kids. ~SKAT~
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May 15, 2014 at 4:14 PM
Takes a special person Skat....my gran was that....thanks for reading x
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May 8, 2014 at 6:21 AM
This poem definitely readings like a haunting lyrics or song. "You placed yourself upon the line not caring of the cost" - loved that line, and I enjoyed reading the poem. Thank you for posting and sharing. : ) Always, Laura
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May 8, 2014 at 4:37 PM
Thank you Laura My gran was an amazing Lady...Had this one published in a book by a n english publishing company...x
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May 5, 2014 at 8:02 AM
It is my pleasure.
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May 4, 2014 at 8:44 AM
This feels like an old time hymn. Very heart felt..
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May 5, 2014 at 2:24 AM
Wtot this one for my Gran she raised 4 of us and lived through two world wars...It is a song as is Dream Out Loud ...I am currently working on putting them down on CD ....thanks again for reading will visit your page after work
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