Troubled Soul
I mean could it be any worse on this level
Trying to keep it together not lose control
Is this just a curse like the work of the devil
Perhaps it's true my spirit he has then stole
And why I always dwell, this loss of self worth
Because inside feels like this bottomless pit
As at times it dose feel like it is hell on earth
A light at the end of the tunnel, it's no longer lit
If I could only for once find some sort of heaven
Misplaced, if I'd watched where I had then trod
But would I still have this feeling of Armageddon
Looking for saving grace forever praying to god
It is that same old feeling the same old marignrol
Its like hay mister am I really ever being heard
I feel like an unsolved case, this troubled soul
I can hear a whisper but though never any word
A TROUBLED SOUL ORIGINAL IDEA BACK IN 2001 CHANGED SCAPPED SO MANY TIMES
BECAUSE DID NOT KNOW HOW TO PUT IN TO RIGHT CONTEXT STILL NOT HAPPY
WITH THIS ALSO WANTED TO MAKE FOUR VERSE RATHER THAN SIX VERSE
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FOR EXAMPLE HELL ON EARTH IN ONE LINE SOUNEDE BETTER THAN TRYING TO MAKE TWO LINES INTO ONE VERSE
FELT LIKE TRYING TO DRAG OUT TO MUCH I DONT KNOW AN EXSTENSION OF
STATE OF MIND STATE OF CONFUSION AND SHADOW OF DOUBT MORE PERSONAL
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PAST AND PRESENT a troubled soul written 2012 2013 by my self davidscott
this part one to a shadow of doubt....................................
Copyright © David Scott | Year Posted 2014
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