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Trouble With Wishes

I wish I could make wish that could make me make a wish to turn all trouble makers into trouble shooters who wish they could make a wish to make them stay out of trouble so I would't have to make a wish at all so I could shoot straight to the nearest pub and shoot some pool instead of having all this trouble making wishes to make wishes.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/19/2016 4:03:00 PM

hahaha. down on the contest? Great fun here.

David Smith
Date: 7/19/2016 5:42:00 PM

While I do have a passion to write poems about my take on life and hand out words of wisdom, I like to throw in nonsense type poems and silly rhymes plus lighter work. Balance is important and when you have a sense of humour like mine that needs feeding, doubly so.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/15/2016 5:47:00 AM

Interesting prose type work..I wish also that people could do what is right so that all could go smoothly but someday it will..Thanks for the visit to my page..Soup mail soon..Sara