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Trouble Time

so many won't controll some or very bold fame is there gold tho they or told what theyer doing to old theyer or very unkind this is TROUBLE TIME

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Date: 4/2/2017 4:06:00 AM
A beautiful poem....I might make a few corrections if I may. 1st. line....controll should be control: 2nd. line....or should be are, 3rd. line...there should be their, 4th. line, or should be are, 5th.line theyer should be they're, 6th. line theyer should be their. (Perhpas English is not your first language, but if you post poetry online I feel it should be without so many gramatical errors. I hope you do not take offense as I am trying to be of help to you as a writer. ~Sharon
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