Trouble Time

so many won't controll
some or very bold
fame is there gold
tho they or told
what theyer doing to old
theyer or very unkind
this is
TROUBLE TIME
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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April 2, 2017 at 4:06 AM
A beautiful poem....I might make a few corrections if I may. 1st. line....controll should be control: 2nd. line....or should be are, 3rd. line...there should be their, 4th. line, or should be are, 5th.line theyer should be they're, 6th. line theyer should be their. (Perhpas English is not your first language, but if you post poetry online I feel it should be without so many gramatical errors. I hope you do not take offense as I am trying to be of help to you as a writer. ~Sharon
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