Carrie Richards Poet Dodoitsu

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Trouble Maker

She seems to come from nowhere...
she appears just like a song...
It seems she somehow knows the
other side of me

I see her in rain puddles
and I'm troubled, just to know
that I am never alone
even when she's gone
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12/6/15  For The Dodoitsu Doppleganger Contest
Sponsored By Alfred Vassallo

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Vince Suzadail Jr. May 30, 2016 at 9:36 PM Nicely written.

Sara Kendrick December 11, 2015 at 5:07 PM Stopping by with congrats..Way to go...Sara

Andrea Dietrich December 8, 2015 at 4:08 PM Love it, Carrie. Congrats for a well deserved win.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma December 8, 2015 at 6:06 AM Very wonderful write Carrie.. Congrats on big win!

CayCay Godwin December 7, 2015 at 3:16 PM So very creative - congratulations on your win ... CayCay

Skat A December 7, 2015 at 12:54 PM Carrie, Congratulations on your win. SKAT

Eve Roper December 7, 2015 at 12:05 PM Congratulations on your win, Carrie!

Sandra Haight December 7, 2015 at 10:17 AM Excellent, Carrie. Congratulations on your nice win. Hugs, Sandra

Richard Lamoureux December 7, 2015 at 8:08 AM I like he feel of this piece. Congratulations.

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores December 7, 2015 at 7:04 AM Congratulations on the placement of the contest Carrie.