Tropical Smile

Sun kissed sand, glistens
Bathed palm leafs fan fresh, smile, breezed
Ocean calls fill; speak
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
July 12, 2010 at 11:15 AM
Congratulations Jessica on your win in Linda-Marie's contest "Tropical Treasures". Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
July 11, 2010 at 9:13 PM
Congrats on the 9th place win, Jessica
Johnson Avatar
July 11, 2010 at 2:05 PM
VLlery nice. congratulations on your win. Love, joyce
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July 11, 2010 at 1:09 PM
nice and sweet Jessica, what an hnor to read your work. Glad i am enjoying to see your post here at the soup. enjoy your day,..p..d
Devonshire Avatar
July 11, 2010 at 1:07 PM
Awesome! So glad to see you in the winners' circle. Loved this poem the first time I read it and it's even better the second time around, Jessica. Love, Carolyn
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July 11, 2010 at 10:39 AM
Nice use of alliteration. Congratulations on being one of the winners in the Tropical Treasures contest. Keep on writing. I wish you continued success. Karen
Freeman Avatar
July 11, 2010 at 10:10 AM
Congratulations, Jessica. On a fine poem's presentation. Agape, Moses
Dietrich Avatar
July 11, 2010 at 10:04 AM
Congratulations on your win, Jessica. Luv, Andrea
Sweetheart Avatar
July 11, 2010 at 9:17 AM
Congrats Jessica on your success in my Tropical Treasures contest with this wonderful and descriptive Haiku from the vacation photos.. thankxxx for supporting my contest.. with luv..
Devonshire Avatar
July 10, 2010 at 8:15 PM
Thank you for giving me a "Tropical Smile" with your lovely haiku, Jessica. But if the ocean calls, you may find some jellyfish. LOL Love, Carolyn
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