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Tropical Smile

Sun kissed sand, glistens Bathed palm leafs fan fresh, smile, breezed Ocean calls fill; speak

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/12/2010 11:15:00 AM

Congratulations Jessica on your win in Linda-Marie's contest "Tropical Treasures". Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/11/2010 9:13:00 PM

Congrats on the 9th place win, Jessica

Joyce Johnson

Date: 7/11/2010 2:05:00 PM

VLlery nice. congratulations on your win. Love, joyce

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/11/2010 1:09:00 PM

nice and sweet Jessica, what an hnor to read your work. Glad i am enjoying to see your post here at the soup. enjoy your day,..p..d

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/11/2010 1:07:00 PM

Awesome! So glad to see you in the winners' circle. Loved this poem the first time I read it and it's even better the second time around, Jessica. Love, Carolyn

Date: 7/11/2010 10:39:00 AM

Nice use of alliteration. Congratulations on being one of the winners in the Tropical Treasures contest. Keep on writing. I wish you continued success. Karen

John Freeman

Date: 7/11/2010 10:10:00 AM

Congratulations, Jessica. On a fine poem's presentation. Agape, Moses

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/11/2010 10:04:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, Jessica. Luv, Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/11/2010 9:17:00 AM

Congrats Jessica on your success in my Tropical Treasures contest with this wonderful and descriptive Haiku from the vacation photos.. thankxxx for supporting my contest.. with luv..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/10/2010 8:15:00 PM

Thank you for giving me a "Tropical Smile" with your lovely haiku, Jessica. But if the ocean calls, you may find some jellyfish. LOL Love, Carolyn