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Tropical Island Surprise

I blinked and wondered what became of all the ice and snow; I thought I'd stepped into the loo and that is all I know.... I looked around and found the door - and saw the snowy plain once more.

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Date: 6/9/2024 6:44:00 PM
Like this creative piece made me chuckle. love phyl
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Date: 6/7/2024 2:42:00 PM
Hmm sounds like you have been watching the HBO series Dark Matter! It's a really cool series and in one episode this description you wrote mimics what was behind the door to one of the multiverses
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Date: 6/7/2024 12:49:00 PM
Creative one for sure. Keep on writing. Sara K
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