Tropic Isle

Breathe in sweet scents of tuberose
And let fine mist caress your face,
Dive deep into aqua waters—
Become enchanted with this place.

(6/24/2019)

Arbitrium Divisa 2 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Gregory R Barden 

Stanza taken from original poem "Island Spirit"

 (Poem of the Day at Poetry Soup January 17, 2015)
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Delaney Avatar
August 1, 2019 at 4:57 AM
Oh...I so miss the scent of tuberose, Plumeria, Pikake, all those heady flowers. Thanks for taking me back. Love, SuZ
Neumann Avatar
July 18, 2019 at 5:44 AM
Very powerful.
Dietrich Avatar
July 10, 2019 at 3:25 PM
thanks, connie, for all your recent comments to me. I was very busy last few days. My nephew was in town. He is the professional gambler from out east. Such a pleasant guy he is. Wish my son were as thoughtful.
Allison Avatar
July 10, 2019 at 1:26 PM
Absolutely enchanting Connie so glad you chose this stanza for the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 10, 2019 at 3:23 PM
Tuberose has a wonderfully heady aroma that I adore Jan. Have ever taken in its scent? Thank you for the encouraging words Jan.xxoo : )
Nau Avatar
July 8, 2019 at 12:25 AM
Made me miss Tahiti. I miss Moorea where the Southern sky at night would wink with strange stars. Have you ever been lost at night because they were all the wrong stars? Anyhoo, it was fun to be back on that island. Thanks for transporting me.
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 10, 2019 at 3:20 PM
My night sky has changed from what was familiar. I can relate Edlynn. Thank YOU for your wonderful comment. : ) xxoo
Dietrich Avatar
July 6, 2019 at 7:09 PM
can't believe I never responded to this one yet. I think you chose a great quatrain from your original poem! HOpe your day is going fine for you.
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 7, 2019 at 2:40 PM
Thank you Andrea. Hard to find one stanza to stand alone. xxoo : )
Mcconnell Avatar
July 5, 2019 at 10:31 AM
Nice one Connie, really takes us to tropical life itself!
Laurie Avatar
July 2, 2019 at 9:03 PM
Hello Connie … photos of tropical islands give the impression of what paradise looks like. Your verse enhances these thoughts - thank you Connie - Lindsay
Sands Avatar
June 30, 2019 at 5:36 PM
This is so nice! Beautiful, peaceful Connie :)
Proxenos Avatar
June 30, 2019 at 8:45 AM
It wouldn't take me long - I am already enchanted with your island - and would love to visit its aquawaters one day - beautiful poen Connie - good luck in the contest! Hugs, Jennifer.
Callus Avatar
June 30, 2019 at 8:06 AM
What a captivating stanza you chose for the contest, Connie! Tuberose flowers are so fragrant, and I love their waxy white petals. ~ Warm regards // paul
Warrior Avatar
June 29, 2019 at 8:46 AM
Quite the place and quite the stanza excerpt, Connie...lovely said my friend...in line for a win...sending love...^WW^
Adams Avatar
June 28, 2019 at 12:42 PM
how can one not feel enchanted after reading these few words?... nice choice, they make a big impact~ Beautifully penned :) hugs
Krutsinger Avatar
June 28, 2019 at 5:31 AM
I feel enchanted with this place just by reading it, and I want to dive in.
Dietrich Avatar
June 28, 2019 at 1:36 AM
So lovely your choice. All the funeral is over I enjoyed time with family. Traveling g back home all day Friday.
Gondolf Avatar
June 27, 2019 at 8:16 PM
I am enchanted with the place just reading your words, Connie, thanks for the trip to paradise. All my best. John
Rodrigues Avatar
June 27, 2019 at 6:01 PM
So adventurous! Nice!
Johnson Avatar
June 27, 2019 at 10:59 AM
I am having trouble getting on my computer to work when I need it so I have not been answering often. Thank you for being so faithful with your comments. I am hoping to get on more.
Canerdy Avatar
June 26, 2019 at 9:09 PM
Ahhh, so lovely, Connie! Janice
Romios Avatar
June 26, 2019 at 7:39 PM
Connie,a lovely write...Tuberose and aqua waters...marvelous.. Panagiota xoxo
Cunningham Avatar
June 26, 2019 at 1:57 PM
Sounds like paradise Connie. A poem in its own right. Good luck. Tom
Pandit Avatar
June 26, 2019 at 12:01 PM
A beautiful stanza you picked for the contest--all the best Connie.
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 26, 2019 at 12:56 PM
Funny we just had two days of pouring rain and thunder and lightning (which rarely happens). For some reason, we just don't get thunder and lightning here like Florida does. Thank you Vijay. : ) xxoo
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