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Trochee-Percy's Pre-Dic-Ament

Percy's pickle pointed west
Larry's pointed down
Little Mary looked perplexed
Percy grinned and clowned.
Mary's small feet kept abreast
Larry looked around
'Till a tree limb snagged her dress
making Mary frown.

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Poet Destroyer A

June 2, 2012 at 8:22 PM

DEBBIE, a wonderful congratulations in Andrea's 7/5 TROCHEE contest~ :-) PD

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

June 1, 2012 at 1:01 AM

Congrats on your win, Debbie! Your entry was my favorite. So cute! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

Josie Whitehead

May 31, 2012 at 7:24 AM

Congratulations on your win Debbie. It would be strange if you hadn't won!

Carol Sunshine Brown

May 30, 2012 at 6:54 AM

Congratulations on your win in Andrea's "The 7/5 Trochee" contest Debbie. Love, Carol

Joann Grisetti

May 29, 2012 at 11:58 AM

Very humorous -well done. Congratulations.

David Williams

May 29, 2012 at 1:42 AM

DEbbie, congrats on your win..David

Deborah Burch

May 29, 2012 at 12:20 AM

Congratulations on your win, Debbie :-) *curtsey* ...lol love ya, deb

Andrea Dietrich

May 29, 2012 at 12:18 AM

Debs, I had to do a double take with yours and then I looked at the title and totally got it! wish you had called it a pickle or something in the next to last line. hahaha. Perfect meter, my friend. Congrats!

Kathryn Collins

May 12, 2012 at 6:28 AM

Dear Debbie - Do I detect a bit of naughtiness here? Very original. love, Kathy

Jack Horne

May 11, 2012 at 2:50 PM

lol, great fun here, debs. many congrats on all your wins, my friend

Lucilla Carrillo

May 11, 2012 at 8:28 AM

Debbie; this is good I really enjoyed it very much. Lucilla

Syed Amaan Ahmad

May 10, 2012 at 11:38 AM

Well, yeah maybe I can and well, I did not write that poem for the contest. I dont write specifically for contests. Most of my poems/stories are when I "hold my spirits" lol... you know what I mean? So, I just came across his contest and therefore, I entered. Winning or losing doesnt matter. I write randomly and not to win/lose but cuz I cant hold my thoughts in my head, especially, when my spirits want to escape from me... lol... it's just that words come to my head and I put them on. lol. hugs

Syed Amaan Ahmad

May 10, 2012 at 8:21 AM

1)Finished 3 large Carlsberg, 90ml JW, 4 shots Absolut mins before I wrote that. Well, nobody knows when I'm drunk or sober. I know,kinda eccentric,so I can understand why I "didnt" sound drunk. Also,it doesnt necessarily mean that words should "beee likkee dis wen a persn is draaank" 2) I'm Agnostic; therefore I hold no interest in following Holy Books. And I dont "struggle to write". 3) Baffling = Sarcasm (but in a positive/friendly way) since it was simple (cute, nice) Hugs, love and peace :)