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Triumph Luster

Triumph luster can forever last against stain! Verily true when won thru God’s might and His grace With faith in His might as the Supreme sovereign. Victory medals glow with accomplishments’ gain While the focus is on the Lord in running the race… Triumph luster can forever last against stain. Trophies garnered in battles will just be in vain When selfishness is upheld by arrogance-brace Showing patina’s tarnishing effect so plain. Pageant crowns sparkle with pleasant beauty midst pain As virtuous deeds accompany worship-praise Triumph luster can forever last against stain. Championship belts may hide every corrosion-strain But not the rust of greed and envy with their trace That are encroaching the heart and hurting the vein. Jewels of genuine works shine on servant’s terrain Gems of life-building treasures reflect prayer rays Triumph luster can forever last against stain In honoring the Lord* midst His loving domain.
*Proverbs 3:9 Honour the LORD... June 30, 2018 5th Place, "Patina" Poetry Contest Sponsored by Anthony Slausin; judged on 7/3/2018.

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Date: 7/4/2018 10:44:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this beautiful style and lovely poem. Well done!
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Date: 7/4/2018 10:15:00 PM
Congrats on your high win, Beata. Well done.
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Date: 7/4/2018 2:43:00 PM
Wonderful poem, Beata, .. excellent .. Congratulations on your win... Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/3/2018 10:36:00 PM
A meaningful and beautifully lustrous poem both in form and content, Beata. Congratulations on your wonderful win. ~Susan
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Beata Agustin
Date: 7/4/2018 12:57:00 AM
Praise God. Thanks so much.
Date: 7/3/2018 2:51:00 PM
Well done, Beata !! You have written a wonderful Villanelle, which is a difficult form ! Congrats to you!
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Beata Agustin
Date: 7/4/2018 12:58:00 AM
Praise God. Thanks so much. Congratulations likewise.

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