Triumph After Defeat

Embark on a journey to the world within,
Where you are the garden, the desert, and the ocean's kin.
Light the torch, brave the Stygian Himalayas' daunting span,
To find the lucent home where the day's light began.

Drink deeply from the wine pot, let the feisty spirit rise,
From the stalwart city's fermented berries, under open skies.
The clouds of fallacy, they're set to burn and turn to dust,
As lies melt away, in evanescence we trust.

Stand firm with your spear, unwavering, staunch, and true,
As cyclones of lust and deceit bring auguries anew.
Monetary monsters howl, encircling with greed's loud call,
A fierce fight looms, a cataclysm, potent and tall.

The array we face may seem a chasm, deep and wide,
Yet in this battle, we triumph only if our old selves have died.
In the land of the sun, where corpses lay, victory is found,
Resurrected by mercy's rain, in new life we are unbound.


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Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 9/25/2014 8:38:00 AM
A nice philosophy is hidden in the title of the poem itself. It's a metaphor indeed, I feel so. Thanks for this beautiful poem, my poet friend. Loved always,bl
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Date: 9/25/2014 11:07:00 PM
Many Many thanks for your visit Sir, exactly it is a metaphor and a message is hidden in the whole poem. thanks sir you understood it my poem... Malik
Date: 9/16/2014 9:10:00 AM
It's deep and dark and I am not sure why but it does speak to me on some lord of the rings level I get ..... Tricia
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Date: 9/16/2014 10:56:00 PM
Thanks Tricia for stopping by and reading me, ad thanks for the nice comment.. Malik
Date: 9/9/2014 8:55:00 PM
This poem invites the reader into a beautiful place we will not want to miss... a place within...wow..."Corpses will triumph in land of sun. By rain of mercy to be Resurrected." That is... stunning... I love your work! Always, Laura
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Date: 9/10/2014 1:43:00 AM
Thanks Laura for your time and warm comments, many many thanks for appreciation.. god bless Friend Always, Malik.
Date: 9/5/2014 9:37:00 AM
A strong and deep write my friend... Reminds me of several of my writes from 40 years ago!!
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Ma Yaseen
Date: 9/6/2014 5:51:00 AM
Thanks Mr. Robert, It really feels great when people like you read and praise people like me. It really means a lotttt. I only added so many ttt,trying to add weight to the feeling :). Hope this affection will last long. Best wishes.
Date: 9/5/2014 7:35:00 AM
Very deep write but I really hope it's not all death that will give us victory .. Your images are powerful.. I like the cloud of fallacy.. Great metaphor..
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Date: 9/6/2014 5:48:00 AM
Thanks a lot Dear Olive. your words are really influential and seep into heart. Thanks for appreciation, I meant there either desires will kill us or we have to kill them, but always we will get killed. thanks again for reading poems of a novice person.. God bless you dear :)
Date: 9/4/2014 11:56:00 PM
So nice of you Dear Kara Fraine for your warm inputs. stay blessed.
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Date: 9/4/2014 11:36:00 PM
My such imagery and beautiful with choice of words that move the reader
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Date: 9/4/2014 11:59:00 PM
Can i connect you on linkedin to share and recieve healthy views.
Date: 9/4/2014 10:56:00 PM
Thanks Kika Ayala.
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Date: 9/4/2014 2:31:00 PM
Love it - excellent beautiful write! Welcome to PoetrySoup. Kika
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Date: 9/4/2014 6:35:00 AM
comments are warmly welcome.
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