Tritena

My younger brother who once was so shy
Has opened his wings and learned how to fly
And created something so beautiful

Along with his wife, also beautiful
She came into this world looking so shy
But it's obvious one day she will fly

Only weeks later she begins to fly
Into our hearts and it's so beautiful 
This little girl is now so far from shy

Once so shy, now she flies, it's beautiful


7/21/2014
I didn't see Tritena in the form of poem section so I just made that the title and picked ABC since a form was mandatory.
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Dietrich Avatar
June 12, 2019 at 7:17 PM
Yes, I think I know this poetry form and it's too bad they don't put it at Soup as one of the forms. WELL done.
Jae Avatar
June 13, 2019 at 2:04 PM
Thank you so much! This was for my first contest here :) I may go back and try this form again!
A   Avatar
July 31, 2014 at 12:32 AM
OK...
A   Avatar
July 28, 2014 at 8:21 PM
I have no idea what you mean
Jae Avatar
July 30, 2014 at 6:46 PM
It's nothing, just misread something
A   Avatar
July 27, 2014 at 7:07 PM
You are welcome John.... I was enjoying the featured poems, and noticed your new poem featured... That's awesome right!
Jae Avatar
July 27, 2014 at 8:56 PM
F'n A it is! I know even abbreviations of bad language is discouraged but I couldn't help myself :) and again thank you for the encouragement!
A   Avatar
July 27, 2014 at 5:49 PM
Hi John, This happens to be an excellent poem, to have featured on the poetry soup's home page. Congratulations, enjoy having your poem featured this week. Always ~ LINDA ~
Jae Avatar
July 27, 2014 at 6:51 PM
We'll thank you so much!
Andresen Avatar
July 25, 2014 at 6:13 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, John :) - I choose your first great written poem - Well done !! - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Gibson Avatar
July 22, 2014 at 8:14 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, John. I am glad you discovered this nice community of writers and hope you enjoy the site. Read the work of other poet's and comment if you find something you like; many poets will return the favor. Over time you will get to "know" some of us. You are welcome to visit my page anytime. Enjoy!
Jae Avatar
July 22, 2014 at 12:39 PM
Thank you so much for the warm welcome. I've been on this site a lot for help but never had the confidence to post anything, so again thank you!
De La Luna Avatar
July 22, 2014 at 6:50 AM
this is beautiful! :)
A   Avatar
July 21, 2014 at 10:15 PM
Hello John, a wonderful poem, beautiful and deep,,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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