Tristich Trio

A TRISTICH TRIO
an unexpected guest arrives,
the daily routine is upset-
cancer leaves its calling card
........
tears begin to fall.
emotion becomes a flood-
a cataract of regret flows
.......
a realisation dawns,
fleeting thoughts crystallize-
as 'as is' moment of hope is born

TRISTICH IS A PARALLEL VERSE(Inspired by Hebrew Biblical parallels) it comprises  L1 theme L2 ECHO of theme L3 Punchline/observation

You may hear tristich  me recite this and more of my PS poetry on youtube under my pen name ichthyschiro

Read over 250 more of my short forms @strand poet on twitter
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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La France Avatar
January 1, 2020 at 11:42 AM
Brian, a great trio, wonderfully penned and inspiring !
Strand Avatar
January 1, 2020 at 4:30 PM
Thanks Constance,an interesting form
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July 15, 2015 at 4:01 PM
enjoyed your write Brian, a calling card i'd hope to not come across in the near future Luv p.d.
Merryman Avatar
June 18, 2015 at 1:21 PM
I like this, Brian. I'll have to look up this form. Thanks for sharing! Love, Kim
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