Jan Allison Poet Haiku

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Triplet Trouble Hc

mum checks nursery
one, two, three sleeping babies
at last she can rest! 

One baby wakes, two others start to cry
Three babes awake, she’ll sing a lullaby!

Charliekucoup Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Charles Messina

2/25/19

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Eve Roper March 7, 2019 at 1:36 PM Congratulations on a great Haiku & Couplet, Jan, I need some rest after reading this one :) . ... Hugs Eve ~`* Jan Allison March 7, 2019 at 2:43 PM Thanks Eve:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen March 7, 2019 at 4:39 AM - Congratulations on your win :) - Jan Allison March 7, 2019 at 2:43 PM Thanks Anne-Lise:-) hugs Jan xx

Joseph May March 6, 2019 at 8:06 PM Congrats on your win Jan.. Jan Allison March 7, 2019 at 2:43 PM Thanks Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich March 6, 2019 at 3:07 PM Yours is adorable, jan. I liked it a lot. Jan Allison March 7, 2019 at 2:42 PM Thanks Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx

Charles Messina March 6, 2019 at 2:20 PM How sweet is this one, love this, Jan. Congratulations on your win. hugs // Charlie xx Jan Allison March 7, 2019 at 2:42 PM Thanks Charlie:-) hugs Jan xx

Joseph May February 28, 2019 at 5:50 PM This is very nice Jan...enjoyed Jan Allison February 28, 2019 at 6:02 PM Thanks Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx

P.S. Awtry February 27, 2019 at 1:42 PM Adorable, Jan! Jan Allison February 28, 2019 at 6:02 PM thanks PS:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen February 27, 2019 at 12:15 PM - Three crying babies ... I would have gone crazy :))) - Very sweet on the paper, Jan :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Jan Allison February 28, 2019 at 5:57 PM me too Anne-Lise one was enough for me, that said he was such a good baby and rarely cried and we never experienced the 'terrible two's' either lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Gershon Wolf February 27, 2019 at 10:44 AM Adorable...and about that lullaby now: Either Mom sings that lullaby, or she may well start crying too. LOL. :) gw Jan Allison February 28, 2019 at 5:54 PM I can imagine having a multiple birth puts a great strain on the parents, I was lucky with one amazing son:-) hugs jan xx

Carolyn Devonshire February 26, 2019 at 2:58 PM This is cute and also very clever, Jan. I couldn't put the numbers into such a short form, but yours is delightful and done perfectly! Best wishes for a win, Carolyn Jan Allison February 28, 2019 at 5:53 PM Thanks Carolyn it was a fun challenge:-) hugs Jan xx

Tom Cunningham February 26, 2019 at 12:58 PM How folk cope with more than one amazes me, they deserve a medal. Good luck . Tom. Jan Allison February 28, 2019 at 5:52 PM I agree Tom:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Rodrigues February 25, 2019 at 8:26 PM Could be an all nighter! Jan Allison February 28, 2019 at 11:18 AM thanks Kim:-) hugs Jan xx

Michelle Faulkner February 25, 2019 at 7:08 PM poor mum, three babies is a lot - such a clever idea for the contest! Jan Allison February 28, 2019 at 11:17 AM thanks Michelle:-) hugs Jan xx

Rico Leffanta February 25, 2019 at 6:35 PM The Voice of Experience! Aloha! Rico Jan Allison February 28, 2019 at 11:17 AM I only have one son, the thought of triplets oh heck how would you cope with only 2 boobies lol:-) hugs jan xx

Bette Bavington February 25, 2019 at 5:19 PM Cute. Enjoyed it. Jan Allison February 25, 2019 at 5:21 PM thanks Bette:-) hugs Jan xx

Caren Krutsinger February 25, 2019 at 4:52 PM Well done indeed, Jan. Good luck in the contest. Jan Allison February 25, 2019 at 5:05 PM thanks Caren it was a fun challenge:-) hugs jan xx