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mum checks nursery one, two, three sleeping babies at last she can rest! One baby wakes, two others start to cry Three babes awake, she’ll sing a lullaby! Charliekucoup Poetry Contest Sponsored by Charles Messina 2/25/19

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Eve Roper

Date: 3/7/2019 1:36:00 PM

Congratulations on a great Haiku & Couplet, Jan, I need some rest after reading this one :) . ... Hugs Eve ~`*

Jan Allison
Date: 3/7/2019 2:43:00 PM

Thanks Eve:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/7/2019 4:39:00 AM

- Congratulations on your win :) -

Jan Allison
Date: 3/7/2019 2:43:00 PM

Thanks Anne-Lise:-) hugs Jan xx

Joseph May

Date: 3/6/2019 8:06:00 PM

Congrats on your win Jan..

Jan Allison
Date: 3/7/2019 2:43:00 PM

Thanks Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/6/2019 3:07:00 PM

Yours is adorable, jan. I liked it a lot.

Jan Allison
Date: 3/7/2019 2:42:00 PM

Thanks Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx

Charles Messina

Date: 3/6/2019 2:20:00 PM

How sweet is this one, love this, Jan. Congratulations on your win. hugs // Charlie xx

Jan Allison
Date: 3/7/2019 2:42:00 PM

Thanks Charlie:-) hugs Jan xx

Joseph May

Date: 2/28/2019 5:50:00 PM

This is very nice Jan...enjoyed

Jan Allison
Date: 2/28/2019 6:02:00 PM

Thanks Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx

P.S. Awtry

Date: 2/27/2019 1:42:00 PM

Adorable, Jan!

Jan Allison
Date: 2/28/2019 6:02:00 PM

thanks PS:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/27/2019 12:15:00 PM

- Three crying babies ... I would have gone crazy :))) - Very sweet on the paper, Jan :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 2/28/2019 5:57:00 PM

me too Anne-Lise one was enough for me, that said he was such a good baby and rarely cried and we never experienced the 'terrible two's' either lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/27/2019 10:44:00 AM

Adorable...and about that lullaby now: Either Mom sings that lullaby, or she may well start crying too. LOL. :) gw

Jan Allison
Date: 2/28/2019 5:54:00 PM

I can imagine having a multiple birth puts a great strain on the parents, I was lucky with one amazing son:-) hugs jan xx

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/26/2019 2:58:00 PM

This is cute and also very clever, Jan. I couldn't put the numbers into such a short form, but yours is delightful and done perfectly! Best wishes for a win, Carolyn

Jan Allison
Date: 2/28/2019 5:53:00 PM

Thanks Carolyn it was a fun challenge:-) hugs Jan xx