Triple Haiku-Snow and Wonderment

JACK'S SNOWMAN

It took three whole days
for Jack to build a snowman;
he's as tall and strong


THRILLED BY SNOW

They are thrilled and scream..
playing in the deep, fresh snow;
they cannot their mom 


PONDERING MYSTERY

Heart, take a quick look: 
isn't winter's glittering snow 
so mysterious?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Roberts Avatar
December 5, 2010 at 10:51 AM
congrats on your win with this wonderful set of haikus
Kendrick Avatar
December 4, 2010 at 9:20 AM
Good work..Congratulations on your win..
Neels Avatar
December 2, 2010 at 9:46 AM
Andrew, congratulations on your win in Irma's contest ;-)
Mehta Avatar
December 2, 2010 at 8:39 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of Skat
Freeman Avatar
December 2, 2010 at 8:28 AM
Congratulations Andrew, on your worthy poem's recognition. Agape, Moses
Harper Avatar
December 2, 2010 at 7:56 AM
I love the second one best, makes me remember my youth, great job, congrats on your win!
A   Avatar
December 2, 2010 at 7:26 AM
Andrew) Congratulations! With your awesome entry! Enjoyed the chills here in this snowy contest,...p.d.
Wellington Avatar
December 2, 2010 at 6:01 AM
Congratulations Andrew on your big win. Joy (Jew)
Brown Avatar
December 2, 2010 at 3:59 AM
Big congratulations on your win Andrew in S K A T*s contest. Love, Carol
Cwiak Avatar
December 1, 2010 at 9:13 PM
Great win, Andrew. Congrats on your big win in the contest. Dan C
Dietrich Avatar
December 1, 2010 at 8:42 PM
Congratulations, Andrew, on a great win. I really love that last one, telling your heart to take a look! Luv, Andrea
Sweetheart Avatar
December 1, 2010 at 8:34 PM
Congrats Andrew on your second place in the Snow contest with this super write.. enjoy my friend with luv..
A  Avatar
December 1, 2010 at 8:29 PM
Andrew, Many congratulations, in my contest, truly I loved it, and thanks for the awesome entry*luv~SKAT
Brown Avatar
December 1, 2010 at 10:56 AM
We are having our first laying snowfall this morning in Springfield,Ohio. December 1,2010 what a way to enter this month. It is absolutely beautiful and finds me in good spirits. I have enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Andrew. Looking forward to reading more. Have a wonderful day. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
December 1, 2010 at 7:39 AM
Very pleasing haiku on snow. We are now experiencing snow here in Canton, since early morning,Andrew
Onclaud Avatar
December 1, 2010 at 12:26 AM
a shimmering write amidst the blanket of snow... great stuff, andrew. hope you can pass by my and scrutinize my " one like one sky"..lol.. thanks! warmest, nette
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