Triple Decastich-Seven Days Doing Good Deeds

If I had seven days,
I'd feed the hungry...
give milk formulas
to the needy mothers
of the suckling babies
who can't be breast-fed;
what a big smile I'd put
on every infant's face!
And from within, I'd certainly
feel a joy never experienced before!


I wouldn't stop there,
I'd continue searching for them...
for those children who ask for bread,
and a bottle of spring water...
if I were the Pope, I'd sell all the gold
in Vatican City and make them full,
hoping that others will follow his example!
Why do they have to die uselessly;
has society turned away 
from human compassion? 


If I had seven days
to do as I please, I would be
an ambassador for peace,
stop the violence which causes wars
by asking nations to come together and negotiate...
I would be much delighted to see them shake hands!
Some will listen, some will not
and despite their negative reaction,
I will try to convince them with an imposing voice
that they will be sorry for the destruction which will come!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Taylor Avatar
October 29, 2010 at 3:36 PM
Congrats, Andy. Excellent write. Nice going. Ralph
Roberts Avatar
October 28, 2010 at 2:29 PM
a very inspirational piece Andrew, such a selfless way to spend your week, congrats on your win in the contest
Mehta Avatar
October 28, 2010 at 12:21 AM
Andrew Congrats on notching 1st place in contest.... Luv/Best wishes .....Hitendra Mehta
Freeman Avatar
October 27, 2010 at 5:08 PM
Congratulations Andrew, a poem well worthy of a top spot. Wnjoy the glory. Agape, Moses
Dietrich Avatar
October 27, 2010 at 2:31 PM
Yes, I remember this fine entry in the contest. Congratulatations, dear Andrew
Mehta Avatar
October 27, 2010 at 1:10 PM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Andrew
Sweetheart Avatar
October 27, 2010 at 12:42 PM
Congrats Andrew on your first place win in Carol's contest with this amazing entry my friend.. enjoy your top spot with your peers today with luv..
Brown Avatar
October 27, 2010 at 12:26 PM
Congratulations and thank you Andrew for taking the time to enter my contest. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
October 5, 2010 at 4:14 AM
Very nice and interesting plan to pass a week with positive deeds. Good luck in the contest, Andrew
Dietrich Avatar
October 4, 2010 at 9:11 PM
Andrew, I think you could do the first stanza farily easily. The last two might be rather difficult to accomplish but they are great and worthy wishes. You have a great heart and this is a heartfelt poem. LUv, Andrea
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