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Triple Acrostic of Life

LIFE Living with wife Indirectly she always dominates Fear is caused by her if hubby goes against her interest Energetic tonic she provides LIFE Loyalty gains smiles of wife always In family wants to be a boss among others Frustrates hubby if not gains importance Emblem of home and her own anthem she sings LIFE Life is meaningless If wife is not with Failure in majority ways Ends with tragedy

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/5/2016 10:55:00 AM

wow, your wife is very much linked to your LIFE, BL. This really shows us. I enjoyed this one. (she sure sounds like the strong leader type)

Bl Devnath
Date: 6/5/2016 11:06:00 AM

Lol, she is very cool now a days. Thanks my lovely friend for your lovely comment. Loved always, bl

Len Gasun

Date: 6/4/2016 8:30:00 AM

An awesome poem on another perception of life my dear friend, BL. they also said that wife is home's light. A pleasure to read one of your precious gems. Have a wonderful weekend to you, your wife and family. love lots and big hug, GL

Bl Devnath
Date: 6/4/2016 9:42:00 AM

Thanks my lovely friend for your beautiful comment and wishes. Loved always, bl

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 6/4/2016 3:49:00 AM

Wife is a ladder that pending of how we treat her, she leads us to Hell or Paradis! Excellent conception my friend, BLD. A seven for each!

Bl Devnath
Date: 6/4/2016 9:35:00 AM

Yes, they can lead to hell or paradise. Thanks my lovely friend for your beautiful uplifting comment. Loved always, bl

Jan Allison

Date: 6/3/2016 5:08:00 PM

Interesting takes on life - you better check with the wife that they are accurate lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Bl Devnath
Date: 6/4/2016 9:32:00 AM

i know they are accurate my lovely friend just doing fun with them. Thanks for your ha ha ha comment. Loved always, bl

Harry Horsman

Date: 6/3/2016 5:08:00 PM

Interesting subject BL enjoyed

Bl Devnath
Date: 6/4/2016 9:29:00 AM

Thanks for your comment my lovely friend. Loved always, bl