Triple Acrostic of Life

LIFE 
Living with wife
Indirectly she always dominates 
Fear is caused by her if hubby goes against her interest
Energetic tonic she provides 

LIFE
Loyalty gains smiles of wife always
In family wants to be a boss among others
Frustrates hubby if not gains importance 
Emblem of home and her own anthem she sings 

LIFE 

Life is meaningless
If wife is not with
Failure in majority ways
Ends with tragedy
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Dietrich Avatar
June 5, 2016 at 10:55 AM
wow, your wife is very much linked to your LIFE, BL. This really shows us. I enjoyed this one. (she sure sounds like the strong leader type)
Devnath  Avatar
June 5, 2016 at 11:06 AM
Lol, she is very cool now a days. Thanks my lovely friend for your lovely comment. Loved always, bl
Gasun Avatar
June 4, 2016 at 8:30 AM
An awesome poem on another perception of life my dear friend, BL. they also said that wife is home's light. A pleasure to read one of your precious gems. Have a wonderful weekend to you, your wife and family. love lots and big hug, GL
Devnath  Avatar
June 4, 2016 at 9:42 AM
Thanks my lovely friend for your beautiful comment and wishes. Loved always, bl
Trifiatis Avatar
June 4, 2016 at 3:49 AM
Wife is a ladder that pending of how we treat her, she leads us to Hell or Paradis! Excellent conception my friend, BLD. A seven for each!
Devnath  Avatar
June 4, 2016 at 9:35 AM
Yes, they can lead to hell or paradise. Thanks my lovely friend for your beautiful uplifting comment. Loved always, bl
Horsman Avatar
June 3, 2016 at 5:08 PM
Interesting subject BL enjoyed
Devnath  Avatar
June 4, 2016 at 9:29 AM
Thanks for your comment my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
Allison Avatar
June 3, 2016 at 5:08 PM
Interesting takes on life - you better check with the wife that they are accurate lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Devnath  Avatar
June 4, 2016 at 9:32 AM
i know they are accurate my lovely friend just doing fun with them. Thanks for your ha ha ha comment. Loved always, bl
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