Triple a Challenge
Your asseveration is unsupported –
With pretentious ideas
I once thought you were altruistic
But now the blind fold unveiled
I see now vividly axiomatic –
You carry away your sorrows and drown them in your doubt
Such a shame my darling-
You could of rose above it
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