Trip Around the Sun

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A historical moment now begun, my next trip around the sun. The trip one year in time, a day individually mine. My trip this time unique not like the last nor complete. Will I be better this time around, or will more sorrows be found? This trip goes forward, never back, it never stands still, that's fact.

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 7/31/2024 2:34:00 PM

Nicely thought out and executed Miranda! :)

Miranda Hawley
Date: 8/2/2024 2:04:00 PM

Thank you for that.

David Crandall

Date: 7/10/2024 7:46:00 PM

Happy birthday, and happy sailing around the sun! I hope you enjoy your trip!

Miranda Hawley
Date: 7/10/2024 7:48:00 PM

Thank you for that! Yes, this is a good year and perhaps there are better still to come.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/7/2024 7:47:00 PM

A good question to ask if oneself at this time. When was your birthday? Are you Cancer sign like my hubbie? Also thanks for my win on your contest

Miranda Hawley
Date: 7/9/2024 4:47:00 AM

Yes, I am a Cancer zodiac sign. I will soup Mail you with my birthday.

Tom Woody

Date: 7/5/2024 7:02:00 AM

Ooh love the photo and the poem, which asks us to ponder whether or not we'll do better this year than last. Self improvement should always be on our agenda

Miranda Hawley
Date: 7/5/2024 8:28:00 AM

Lately I have heard people calling their birthday a trip around the sun, so I thought it would make an excellent poem. I agree with you on self improvement should always be on the agenda. Thanks!