Miranda Hawley Poet Rhyme

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Trip Around the Sun

A historical moment now begun,
my next trip around the sun.
The trip one year in time,
a day individually mine. 
My trip this time unique
not like the last nor complete.
Will I be better this time around,
or will more sorrows be found?
This trip goes forward, never back,
it never stands still, that's fact.

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Linda Alice Fowler July 31, 2024 at 2:34 PM Nicely thought out and executed Miranda! :) Miranda Hawley August 2, 2024 at 2:04 PM Thank you for that.

David Crandall July 10, 2024 at 7:46 PM Happy birthday, and happy sailing around the sun! I hope you enjoy your trip! Miranda Hawley July 10, 2024 at 7:48 PM Thank you for that! Yes, this is a good year and perhaps there are better still to come.

Andrea Dietrich July 7, 2024 at 7:47 PM A good question to ask if oneself at this time. When was your birthday? Are you Cancer sign like my hubbie? Also thanks for my win on your contest Miranda Hawley July 9, 2024 at 4:47 AM Yes, I am a Cancer zodiac sign. I will soup Mail you with my birthday.