Trinity

TRINITY T he Holy Spirit R ises to the call I nterested only in N urturing the spirit. I ndenturing not T he souls of Y our faithful, but freeing them. Acrostic is a form where the first word or letter in each line will spell out a secondary message if read in sequence. Strictly metered Free Verse but can be rhymed or unrhymed.

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James Foulk

Date: 7/11/2011 10:45:00 AM

a great Acrostic, and what better word to use, very creative. thank you for commenting on Memories of Woolworth's.

Judy Ball
Date: 7/11/2011 2:07:00 PM

Thank you so much James. Glad you liked it and thanks for stopping by and for your kind words. God Bless, JB

Jl Sadberry

Date: 7/10/2011 7:44:00 AM

Smile, *^_^* “First I Wish to Say Thank You for Your Lovely Kind Com *^_^* Second, Tis A Pleasure to Have Met Your Precious Heart My Dear, Judy Ball = As for This Wonderful Painting In Verseful Colours, I Find Somewhat of A Paradox *^_^* For One Is Truly Free & Yet A Prisoner As The Apostle Paul Did Often State == Albeit A Very Beautiful Parallel Alongst The Path of Light, My Dear *^_^* Beautiful Poem.” === My Love Always, Jasper *

Judy Ball
Date: 7/10/2011 4:44:00 PM

Thank you so much Jasper. Wonderful to meet you. Glad you liked this. God Bless, JB

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/10/2011 12:50:00 AM

Very nicely said, just in time for Sunday school! yep it's sunday already and here I am like a fool. But couldn't get away from hubbie all day until after 11. Yeah, I am probably like your mom. But I am trying to not be such a pack rat!!

Judy Ball
Date: 7/10/2011 4:47:00 PM

I'm sure you don't even come close to my mom. No one else ever has. She fills up her house like the people you see on Hoarders. It's a true sickness. Then relatives go over and clear it out for her and she gets mad because they threw away her "treasures". Thanks so much for stopping by . Glad you liked this. God Bless, JB

John Loving Iii

Date: 7/8/2011 7:43:00 PM

Him , The Man , The He in us.

Judy Ball
Date: 7/8/2011 7:51:00 PM

Thanks so much for stopping by my friend. God Bless, JB

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/8/2011 6:58:00 PM

that HE does Judy and the more u rely on HIM the more fantastic the journey my friend.. a glorious inspiration to read luv..

Judy Ball
Date: 7/8/2011 7:35:00 PM

Thank you so much my friend. Glad you liked this. Thanks for stopping by. God Bless, JB

Don Johnson

Date: 7/8/2011 3:20:00 PM

Great verse babe, I know how they feel the poor, been there, part of me here:) check 3rd line. xox, Don

Judy Ball
Date: 7/8/2011 5:52:00 PM

Thank you so much my friend for stopping by and for the heads up. I'll fix that. By the way, you inspired my poem,"Caterpillar Dreams". God Bless, JB

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/8/2011 2:53:00 PM

Never knew that it was metered..Enjoyed the testimony of your faith..Sara

Judy Ball
Date: 7/8/2011 3:04:00 PM

Thanks so much Sara. Hoping I don't step on too many toes by trying to help a bit. Not really that well versed in form myself but learned this from another poetry club I belonged to. Thanks again. God Bless, JB

Juanita Warden

Date: 7/8/2011 2:23:00 PM

Love this..Love my Lord.

Judy Ball
Date: 7/8/2011 2:46:00 PM

Thank you so much Nita. Glad you likedit. God Bless, JB