Trim the Rime
A poem can be left adrift
a deserted, floating wreck
Words wash over rails
on board, a slippery deck
Every poem I've ever written
helps me write the next
A gaggle of "lilliputian critics"
ensure I craft my text
True, I do the proofing
readers do the check
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