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Trim the Rime

A poem can be left adrift a deserted, floating wreck Words wash over rails on board, a slippery deck Every poem I've ever written helps me write the next A gaggle of "lilliputian critics" ensure I craft my text True, I do the proofing readers do the check

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Date: 4/4/2020 11:39:00 PM
Wonderful metaphor - vivid portrait. Congratulations Greg.
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Greg Gaul
Date: 4/5/2020 9:08:00 AM
Sam, thank you for your comment. It's tough to keep virtually up with all the poetic achievers and achievements.

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