Trilogy of Errors

Loved, to lose
Lost to love
Why not did I choose
That was Written Above
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Gazbowski Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 8:28 PM
Nice write.
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March 16, 2016 at 11:39 PM
awesome little poem, H. M. E.,, LINDA
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January 14, 2016 at 11:06 PM
M. Hussain EffenDI, Awesome write, I really like this. Forever ** SKAT **
Wesley Avatar
June 21, 2014 at 4:33 PM
I'm not here often either; life has a way of disturbing the silence of reading. Hope yo a re happy and well. Love, Lizzie
Yamin Avatar
March 22, 2013 at 12:26 PM
I like your Bio. You have not contributed on poetrysoup for a long time. Your friends on poetrysoup miss you. Thanks Hussain for visiting my poem The Suicide Bomber and for your appreciation.
Breidenthal Avatar
March 18, 2013 at 10:10 PM
A very interesting verse! I really like it! Always, Laura
Wesley Avatar
January 29, 2013 at 7:47 PM
Just thinking about you and wonder how you are. Hope all is well and you're being a good boy! :)
Anish Avatar
November 22, 2012 at 8:43 PM
Maby it is all "written" above. But we always have hope! Peace & Blessings Matthew Ansih
Yamin Avatar
November 6, 2012 at 1:10 PM
This is an awesome write with economy of words. I like it. You have nor been active on poetrysoup lately. I hope everything is OK with you.
Wesley Avatar
August 28, 2012 at 7:16 AM
I do love to read this, short and sweet with a last line that provides the punch! So nice to have you visit Hussain, to know you are still around!
Wesley Avatar
August 19, 2012 at 8:27 AM
Do you want me towriteone for you, Need something here so I can write you sweet somethings! :)
Wesley Avatar
August 12, 2012 at 1:07 PM
Wonderful to find you visited and I need to thank you for your sweet words. I'm finding it harder to writethese days, my inspiration is sluggish. How are you anyway? Hope all is well with you Hussain! Love, Elizabeth
Wesley Avatar
July 20, 2012 at 9:44 PM
I thinks ya dun retired from the poetic scene eh! Miss ya Hussain, cain't no one replace ya! Luv, Lizzie
Wesley Avatar
May 29, 2012 at 5:55 PM
Wonder where your nspiration has gone to; maybe you are in love and your mind is elsewhere. C'mon now and fess up! :)
Breidenthal Avatar
May 9, 2012 at 4:57 PM
Very interesting poem. Love the title too. (: Thanks for reading my work! Always, Laura
Austin Avatar
May 9, 2012 at 1:49 PM
You are just human. Great read, my friend. LOve, daver
Wesley Avatar
May 7, 2012 at 12:38 PM
Need to keep in touch and see what you are up to. Inspiration seem to be a fleeting thing I think. How are you, hope all is well ! :)
Yamin Avatar
April 30, 2012 at 12:22 PM
Well said. Absolutely stunning. Thanks for your appreciation of my poem Tyranny, Hussain. I feel honored.
Wesley Avatar
April 30, 2012 at 8:04 AM
So nice that pen is moving again! You have a wonderful sequence of thought in this that moves me Hussain. Love is always a great subject to write about :)
Mohammed Avatar
April 30, 2012 at 4:54 AM
This brings to mind what is written"God is love" and "whoso loveth is of God"..The question then is Can we separate ourselves from love without being separated from God?...We continue...Thanks for sharing this very pensive write Hussain...Love Diana
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