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Trilogy of Errors

Loved, to lose
Lost to love
Why not did I choose
That was Written Above

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/4/2016 8:28:00 PM
Nice write.
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Date: 3/16/2016 11:39:00 PM
awesome little poem, H. M. E.,, LINDA
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Date: 1/14/2016 11:06:00 PM
M. Hussain EffenDI, Awesome write, I really like this. Forever ** SKAT **
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Date: 6/21/2014 4:33:00 PM
I'm not here often either; life has a way of disturbing the silence of reading. Hope yo a re happy and well. Love, Lizzie
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Date: 3/22/2013 12:26:00 PM
I like your Bio. You have not contributed on poetrysoup for a long time. Your friends on poetrysoup miss you. Thanks Hussain for visiting my poem The Suicide Bomber and for your appreciation.
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Date: 3/18/2013 10:10:00 PM
A very interesting verse! I really like it! Always, Laura
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Date: 1/29/2013 7:47:00 PM
Just thinking about you and wonder how you are. Hope all is well and you're being a good boy! :)
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Date: 11/22/2012 8:43:00 PM
Maby it is all "written" above. But we always have hope! Peace & Blessings Matthew Ansih
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Date: 11/6/2012 1:10:00 PM
This is an awesome write with economy of words. I like it. You have nor been active on poetrysoup lately. I hope everything is OK with you.
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Date: 8/28/2012 7:16:00 AM
I do love to read this, short and sweet with a last line that provides the punch! So nice to have you visit Hussain, to know you are still around!
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Date: 8/19/2012 8:27:00 AM
Do you want me towriteone for you, Need something here so I can write you sweet somethings! :)
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Date: 8/12/2012 1:07:00 PM
Wonderful to find you visited and I need to thank you for your sweet words. I'm finding it harder to writethese days, my inspiration is sluggish. How are you anyway? Hope all is well with you Hussain! Love, Elizabeth
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Date: 7/20/2012 9:44:00 PM
I thinks ya dun retired from the poetic scene eh! Miss ya Hussain, cain't no one replace ya! Luv, Lizzie
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Date: 5/29/2012 5:55:00 PM
Wonder where your nspiration has gone to; maybe you are in love and your mind is elsewhere. C'mon now and fess up! :)
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Date: 5/9/2012 4:57:00 PM
Very interesting poem. Love the title too. (: Thanks for reading my work! Always, Laura
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Date: 5/9/2012 1:49:00 PM
You are just human. Great read, my friend. LOve, daver
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Date: 5/7/2012 12:38:00 PM
Need to keep in touch and see what you are up to. Inspiration seem to be a fleeting thing I think. How are you, hope all is well ! :)
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Date: 4/30/2012 12:22:00 PM
Well said. Absolutely stunning. Thanks for your appreciation of my poem Tyranny, Hussain. I feel honored.
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Date: 4/30/2012 8:04:00 AM
So nice that pen is moving again! You have a wonderful sequence of thought in this that moves me Hussain. Love is always a great subject to write about :)
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Date: 4/30/2012 4:54:00 AM
This brings to mind what is written"God is love" and "whoso loveth is of God"..The question then is Can we separate ourselves from love without being separated from God?...We continue...Thanks for sharing this very pensive write Hussain...Love Diana
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