Trilogy

Stars Destined Things wished forgotten have found beginnings to a conquering love dream... Awake Facing darkness - I moved through. Finding love and freedom in my mind... Dream Fantasies Inocent kisses, found charm and desire, that sparkle an illusion of love...
02/16/2013 Written By Lucilla M. Carrillo Note: About these poems, they were compose by a bunch of words that were all mixed up. We had to compose a poem with 20 words or less. This what I came up with. I hope you like them.
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Trifiatis Avatar
February 18, 2013 at 4:37 AM
Dear Lucilla, Impressive! Excellent!Marvelous!
Carrillo Avatar
February 18, 2013 at 10:48 AM
I am glad you think so. It makes me feel good.
Jones Avatar
February 17, 2013 at 7:23 PM
You met the challenge and then some...wonderful
Carrillo Avatar
February 18, 2013 at 10:47 AM
Thank you so much.
Dietrich Avatar
February 17, 2013 at 4:26 PM
wow, you did an amazing job with such a challenge. You ended up with something quite lovely!
Horsman Avatar
February 17, 2013 at 10:33 AM
yes they are wonderful
Carrillo Avatar
February 17, 2013 at 10:39 AM
Thank you Harry. We used to call these PIMS, I don't know what they would be called in this site.
Heemstra Avatar
February 16, 2013 at 4:40 PM
Well done a lovely read.
Andresen Avatar
February 16, 2013 at 3:59 PM
Yes, I love them Lucilla ! - Have a lovely weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Carrillo Avatar
February 17, 2013 at 10:36 AM
Thank you Anne Lise.
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