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Tried and True

This is a myth About the Hobabobaknox A fiery dreadful creature That was never seen or caught So how is it I know? Is it true or just a thought If it was never seen How can this story be bought...? Unlike the Jabberwocky, the Hobabobaknox Was very good at staying hidden You see, it understood a lot Human races where forbidden And it knew if it was caught It would be killed and ridden So it just stayed still in its spot However, the creature had to eat So it planned its hunt with caution In the still of the night It would lurk out of its common Waiting for one to view him Then it would throw them in its cauldron It was spineless like a snake Winged like the hawk Eyes in front and back And tails, long like bean-stalks Its color was quite a marvel When you see it, you will shock It will fill you up with terror It can cause your legs to lock Only one can tell the tale Only one was tried and true One night while fast asleep I saw its color Ru I survived the Hobabobaknox In a dream I shared with you -Miranda Lambert- *Rhyme <>

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Date: 3/7/2011 11:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem in Debbie Guzzi's contest Miranda. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/4/2011 11:37:00 PM
enjoyed this Mirander, congrats. Harry
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Date: 3/4/2011 10:49:00 AM
Any creature that becomes familiar with mankind's ways is well advised to remain hidden. You're on a winning streak today, Miranda. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/4/2011 10:24:00 AM
So very Imaginative. What a great name Hobababknox is. I am going to name one of my fish after it.
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Date: 3/4/2011 6:21:00 AM
Congrats Miranda on your dynamic win in Debbie's contest with this brilliant entry luv.. enjoy and happy weekend ...
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Date: 3/4/2011 12:49:00 AM
my dear friend you have a way so good thankyou duncan
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Date: 3/3/2011 12:57:00 PM
Hi Miranda so nice to see an entry from you. Lst word verse 1 do you want the word "brought" like to bring to someone, you have "bought" like to buy?Then give me some periods at the end of your sentences and we will be all good! Thank you so much for this charming tale! Light & Love
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Date: 3/3/2011 12:18:00 PM
Holy crap this was fantastic! Seriously, like Judy said, a movie! At least an awesome video game...which I'd TOTALLY love you for. :) Excellent job!
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Date: 3/3/2011 10:15:00 AM
WOW Scary....made me think...the movies could use your input...Your monster far exceeds theirs....Very enjoyable...thank you......
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