Tried

I love you so much it hurts inside
I hate when we fight and all the days and nights I cried. It seems no matter what I do is not good enough for you because I tried and tried.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Dennis Avatar
August 21, 2012 at 11:46 PM
I like the poem. I think your missing the word 'You' in the last line. Also, this person will never be satisified because they are lacking something. And they don't have a clue to what it is.
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