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I can still hear her boots hit pavement As she walks Down the street By herself The moonlight highlighting her movements

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/31/2023 6:31:00 AM

- Congratulations on your winning poem -

Corey Bryan
Date: 1/31/2023 6:40:00 AM

Thank you so much! I really appreciate that : )

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/30/2023 4:43:00 AM

This one lets one's mind wander along with the moonlight. Thank you for your participation in my contest. I enjoyed reading your entry. Very creative way to go. Sara

Corey Bryan
Date: 1/30/2023 6:02:00 AM

Thanks a lot, Sara! I thought this was a great contest, really fun form. Thanks for hosting

Christuraj Alex

Date: 1/29/2023 9:13:00 PM

Romantically beautiful. Congratulations!

Corey Bryan
Date: 1/30/2023 6:03:00 AM

Thank you so much! I really appreciate the comment : )

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 1/25/2023 4:46:00 PM

This wistfulness and sadness of this memory is so clear, very evocative, best wishes for the contest~

Corey Bryan
Date: 1/27/2023 8:15:00 AM

Thank you so much for the kind words. Best of luck to you as well, Michelle!