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I can still
hear her boots
hit pavement

As she walks
Down the street
By herself

The moonlight
highlighting
her movements

farewelllonelinesslonelylost loveother

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Anne-Lise Andresen

January 31, 2023 at 6:31 AM

- Congratulations on your winning poem -

C.W. Bryan

January 31, 2023 at 6:40 AM

Thank you so much! I really appreciate that : )

Sara Kendrick

January 30, 2023 at 4:43 AM

This one lets one's mind wander along with the moonlight. Thank you for your participation in my contest. I enjoyed reading your entry. Very creative way to go. Sara

C.W. Bryan

January 30, 2023 at 6:02 AM

Thanks a lot, Sara! I thought this was a great contest, really fun form. Thanks for hosting