Tricky

taste me let me drip down your throat swallow me whole until you choke feel me inside and out swooshing all about pump more of me into you until you overload reach depths to man unknown enter all of me over and over again i need to feel you eating me up i want to feel you teasing me inside and out i understand this is all new for you i am willing to take it slow i suggest you slide into it gradually then go for the gusto you will never have enough you will always want more knowledge is something that we all yearn for what did you think i was talking about

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Colin Mitchell Williams

Date: 6/11/2009 7:37:00 AM

Hi Brandy... great whit, and so cleverly done.. even if it wasn't "the bad" ? and what ever "knowing" could be labeled as such. Your talent is truly flowering Brandy.. keep it up

Des Juan Richardson

Date: 6/11/2009 5:45:00 AM

You had me fooled! Wonderful ride and beautifully written. Knowledge is power and I acknowledge that you abused that power through a cleverly written poem! LOL Awesome write! {Des Juan }

James Fraser

Date: 6/10/2009 3:40:00 PM

Clever write Brandy, if it went the way a lot of people thought it was going, it would have been a lovely road>James

Christopher Higgins

Date: 6/10/2009 1:33:00 PM

Well, my mind went down the avenue and lived for a moment enjoying a smoke with a drink to celebrate the smile I have on my face..you may say knowledge and I say welcome to paradise...well done.....

John Rhinem

Date: 6/10/2009 12:34:00 PM

Well, believing that You are one of true faith, I knew that whatever it was, it could hardly be that bad!!? Smile, and yes, knowledge is as gold; whether it be dust? Or whether it be nuggets? Of the world? Or of Heaven? Smile, yet, I loved Your twist upon it all; for it showed Your creativity, and quite an imagination! Excellent job, Brandy Megens!!:)~So, go spread the knowledge, and bless more lives...."Love To You & Yours, Always, John!!":) Bye Again Blessed Lady ~