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Trickling Thoughts

Faucet of logic,
Percolating in my mind;
Drops of poetry.

on writing and wordssenryu

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Carolyn Devonshire

April 9, 2009 at 1:37 PM

Sometimes the words spurt forth, sometimes they trickle drop-by-drop. What I fear most is what happens when the well runs completely dry. Your fount of imagination "runneth over" in this amusing senryu, Raul!

Steve Edmonds

April 5, 2009 at 5:28 PM

Great title explaining all the trickling poems you create.

Chris Goombi

April 3, 2009 at 8:38 PM

Got to love those drops, great work.

Elizabeth Neal

April 3, 2009 at 8:06 PM

Nice title, the last line was perfect. Love Elizabeth

Tyler Martin

April 3, 2009 at 7:54 PM

Percolating, drip, drip, drip huh...nice work. Tyler

Danielle Moreno

April 1, 2009 at 6:01 PM

Great work, drops of poetry is original...........Danielle

Abe Lopez

April 1, 2009 at 5:33 PM

When I'm motivated to work I often experience these wonderful thoughts! very nice........

Robin L. Gass

April 1, 2009 at 5:04 PM

Stunning Senyru! Your imagery is awesome, Raul! I love the title! Love, Robin

Sharon Winter

April 1, 2009 at 1:24 PM

Very cool senryu. So different and creative - but not for you! : ) Awesome! Love, Shar

Christopher Higgins

April 1, 2009 at 4:46 AM

Outstanding my friend..love the mind and faucet concept....good writing.

John Rhinem

April 1, 2009 at 1:45 AM

Smile~Yes. Logic is a very very important characteristic of thought to hold onto! As is within my own belief, "Faith!":) Sometimes, even more so than what logic may wish to say!!?~Wonderful thought here dear Raul! The Man With A Heart of Gold!!!:):)~"My Love To 'You & Yours' Always, John!!!"~Have A Beautiful Day Dear Brother!!!:):)

Deirdre Omaidin

April 1, 2009 at 1:22 AM

These are 3 very clever lines indeed as is the title. It's beautifully expresses. REgards: Déirdre

Brian Strand

April 1, 2009 at 12:47 AM

Like the connections Raul.Rgds Brian & thanks for your kind words

Tyesha Ehigiator

April 1, 2009 at 12:36 AM

So much truth here....Very clever one, I feel shy to say I had to look up the word (Percolating) LOL, that was a big word for me...One I can surely relate to..There are so many thoughts in my mind and all is mixed about but when it all settles down, poetry is what comes out... Fantastic Senryu! I love the "Faucet of logic" Another Masterpiece here..., GB Always, Tyesha

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