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Trickling Thoughts

Faucet of logic, Percolating in my mind; Drops of poetry.

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/9/2009 1:37:00 PM

Sometimes the words spurt forth, sometimes they trickle drop-by-drop. What I fear most is what happens when the well runs completely dry. Your fount of imagination "runneth over" in this amusing senryu, Raul!

Steve Edmonds

Date: 4/5/2009 5:28:00 PM

Great title explaining all the trickling poems you create.

Chris Goombi

Date: 4/3/2009 8:38:00 PM

Got to love those drops, great work.

Elizabeth Neal

Date: 4/3/2009 8:06:00 PM

Nice title, the last line was perfect. Love Elizabeth

Tyler Martin

Date: 4/3/2009 7:54:00 PM

Percolating, drip, drip, drip huh...nice work. Tyler

Danielle Moreno

Date: 4/1/2009 6:01:00 PM

Great work, drops of poetry is original...........Danielle

Abe Lopez

Date: 4/1/2009 5:33:00 PM

When I'm motivated to work I often experience these wonderful thoughts! very nice........

Robin L. Gass

Date: 4/1/2009 5:04:00 PM

Stunning Senyru! Your imagery is awesome, Raul! I love the title! Love, Robin

Sharon Winter

Date: 4/1/2009 1:24:00 PM

Very cool senryu. So different and creative - but not for you! : ) Awesome! Love, Shar

Christopher Higgins

Date: 4/1/2009 4:46:00 AM

Outstanding my friend..love the mind and faucet concept....good writing.

John Rhinem

Date: 4/1/2009 1:45:00 AM

Smile~Yes. Logic is a very very important characteristic of thought to hold onto! As is within my own belief, "Faith!":) Sometimes, even more so than what logic may wish to say!!?~Wonderful thought here dear Raul! The Man With A Heart of Gold!!!:):)~"My Love To 'You & Yours' Always, John!!!"~Have A Beautiful Day Dear Brother!!!:):)

Deirdre Omaidin

Date: 4/1/2009 1:22:00 AM

These are 3 very clever lines indeed as is the title. It's beautifully expresses. REgards: Déirdre

Brian Strand

Date: 4/1/2009 12:47:00 AM

Like the connections Raul.Rgds Brian & thanks for your kind words

Tyesha Ehigiator

Date: 4/1/2009 12:36:00 AM

So much truth here....Very clever one, I feel shy to say I had to look up the word (Percolating) LOL, that was a big word for me...One I can surely relate to..There are so many thoughts in my mind and all is mixed about but when it all settles down, poetry is what comes out... Fantastic Senryu! I love the "Faucet of logic" Another Masterpiece here..., GB Always, Tyesha